I don't know...It was sad and happy...

AWWWWWWW!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I must say, I like it. :) The tenses are a bit confusing and some places really confounded me. There's always room to improve, no? I hope you continue this. :) As a pledged Makorrian, I would love if you brought some of Makorra into this...

;) Just saying. Heh.

Update soon :)

-ang

Ugh this is so sad and beautiful!

I can picture Mako being such a dedicated big bro even though we really don't yet (c'mon April 14).

Great job!

Awesome! im so excited to see the brother relationship between mako and bolin, particularly inflashbacks!

I've never cried reading fanfiction before. That was damn near beautiful.

(But there isn't actually any number in parentheses on the chapter titles. The site probably deleted it; I don't think they allow numerals, for some reaon.)

Ohh this was a good one! Congratulations!

this... this here is Mako... I don't know how you did it, but you found him.

I definitely see him like that. Like he works so hard to keep his cool, but when he snaps he REALLY snaps... the cold calm outer shell that he has definitely holds this burning passion. And I think whether it manifests itself in rage or love (teehee) or probending, once it's out he has a hard time reigning it in.

Please do more. I mean, I already love you forever, but I'll love you even more :D

1) OMG I FOUND YOU ON HERE GAHHH EXCITED! (Waves from Tumblr)

2) I cried... I have been binging on early Mako/Bolin stories and now these two just give me all the feels... and now you too...

3)I really like the idea that Mako has a serous attachment to his scarf, more than just it's his favourite item of clothing... (also, HEADCANNON ACCEPTED)

4) I am looking forward to the rest and I will now continue with gusto :D

I love a good-older-brother Mako :3

I don't know how to explain it, but this was just lovely.

This is AMAZING! Keep writing more!

I love it! I read this in your Tumblr and I loved every word. Thanks for this! Adiós y cuídate.

Great story!

In the middle, I almost didn't realize it was a flashback. Could you maybe edit it and put a line break so readers know it's a different scene?

Awesome, I was shaking as I was reading this!