You truly do excel at wordplay. Can't wait for more of your work.

please please please please please PLEASE continue! This is overwhelmingly cute and I am going into a tizz and I WANT scratch that NEED more!

Seriously... write... NOW

I love it!

Meggie xoxoxox

so cute :)

iknow, i know, this is the third (fourth?) review tonight. but let me just say that i enjoyd this so much. i was pointing and yelling and screaming "PAI SHO! AVATAR REFERENCE!" and yes, i know that is IS set in the avatar world. bu so many peole are just brushing aside the rich history of the... i dont know, avatarness. it was good to see the love. oh, and i had a heart attack when you described Mako's im -too-sexy-for-my-shirt scene.

thats all. :)

MadEclair

Woah-ho-ho, you definitely cannot just leave it there. THAT was unbearably cute, and I really need more. (If you're, you know, inclined to write more and all.) :)

Please, never stop writing.

I'm seriously in love with your writing style. It's really really good.

You're amazingly talented!

God... Im in love with your stories! So well written,so pleasurable to read.

Just keep up the great work!

:D :D I really like this story!

Please add another chapter about their lunch date!

ok i love mako's prompt NO YOU'RE GONNA GET US IN TROUBLE response so much omfg

and the fact you remembered korra probably is not eating meat since she's staying with tenzin! and lbr korra is a meat girl she just is

MAKE IT A TWOSHOT PLEASE I LOVE THIS SHIP

SO MUCH I MAY DIE.

I vote for a continuation! :) Really, I love your writing, and this has so much potential for stories.

So incredibly sweet.

I think I might have a cavity, now.

Silly Korra, you can't stop staring at his abs because he's sexy and you both know it. ;D

This was a brilliant story and it would be a brilliant idea also to continue it. :D