Loved this so much! You write so well. Academy era is so hard to get right, as the characters and relationships haven't fully come into their own yet, but you just nailed this to an absolute perfection. Thank you!

OMG THE CONCLUSION ALMOST MADE ME CRY TEARS OF JOY

I'm loving the slow burn in this story so much. I thought by now I'd get tired with Jim being so immature and part of me wants to hit him on the head but he's not ready yet. My only hope is that you will handle the transition in a natural way without it seeming forced. That being said, I can't wait for him to turn into that guy we all trust and respect. I'mma go read now.

I can't believe how quickly this story sucked me in. I literally cannot stop! The characterisations are beautifully done the plot is ALREADY interesting and the action hasn't even started yet! Thus story has been on my TBR forever and I'm so glad I'm finally reading it. I'm gonna shut up and read now. See you later!

What a great story! Thank you for posting!

This is amaaaaaziiiiing! Bless. Thanks. Appreciation.

YEEEAAAAAH TIME FOR CLOSUUUUUUre!

AHAHAHHAAHHA this is THE GOOD CHSSK! I’m so ready man, so ready. Let’s GO

Say ur star fleet numbers boys then they’ll know u aren’t criminals! Spout some facts! I believe in you!

Surprisingly optimistic end there! I don’t believe it for a minute!

Jim you idiot, you broke your ankle and the bone didn’t dislodge but USING IT is gonna change that! You need to wrap it immediately and NOT put pressure on it you DUMBO. (Hisssss)

Very ominous last sentence! Good splashes. I’m living for it.

Ooooooohhhhh there it is! There it is! I’m so excited

“I used to go camping a lot when I was a kid.” LIAR. You frikkin liar. Liiiieees

Hahaha hahah oh these two are gonna be a RIOT. (Get it?) Actually this is prolly gonna get real angsty but I’m ready.