I love this take on Alice in Wonderland already. Another one I hope to see continue someday.:D

This is good. I imagine you are busy, but by chance is this dead or to be moved to ao3?

You should continue thiiiiiiis! I enjoyed it a lot so far!

I spotted an error, rather glaringly out in front so i'm just going to point it out for everyone.

There is no chapter 2.

Is that the end? I rather enjoyed it. I do hope you continue.

I love this story I had forgotten all about this game I should really start playing it again

I really like your take on the "Wonderland" idea, it is well written and the perspective from Ari's point of view is interesting. Please do continue. :)