Please continue this story. I just binge read all 8 chapters and really want to find out what happens next.

Please continue this. I was really liking this so far.

Wow, I can feel my heart slowly breaking. The last time this story was updated was well over a year ago. This is why I don't often read unfinished stories, there is a huge chance that they will forever remain unfinished. While that might not be what's happened here, it sure feels like it. I will continue to keep an eye on this story until April 26, 2019, in deep hopes that it will be finished in one way or another.

Now that that little comment is out of the way, let me just say, this is one phenominal story. I was intrigued pretty much from the get-go and I found myself craving more before reaching the fifth chapter. Beautifully crafted characters with an elegantly complicated and twisted story that go together to make one hell of an impact. I love this author's work here, and I hope against all hope that this story will be resurrected. I want to see what will happen between Rori and our protagonist. If there was anything at all I'd suggest you to improve is the side characters. They feel super under shadowed when put alongside our protagonist and Rori, and they also feel as if they last but a few hundred words and that's all.

All in all, wonderfully enchanting story. Highly recommend it to anyone, especially if it gets finished.

Neat story, hope you continue

I need to find out what happened next! Fantastic job making the story so far. What happened to the Houndoom?

Holy shit, I was not expecting anything else to come out of that beautiful brain of yours, and I hate myself for being so late. But I would just have to say thank you for this wonderful story, and if you do manage to read this I would appreciate just one more chapter if you could. :D

Jesus fucking christ! I fucking wanted this update so badly you don’t even know! Dude I love this story, and it’s a shame you can’t find time to finish it. It is a phenomenal piece of work. I have never genuinely liked a story this much in years. However, if you by any chance would need somebody to help finish it I could potentially help. If you are interested please contact me at .

This has been an interesting read so far, I'd hope you'll be updating this sometime soon.

A. Maze. So great! I personally have a few problems with the whole poke/man ships, but that takes a backseat to good writing any day, and this is good writing

Hope like hell this is updated often. Amazing plot, great grammar, and a well thought out writing style.

Hello! I love this story premise and your style but there are a few typos here and there. Consider getting a grammar checker like grammarly to help you out with that (just ignore it when you’ve made a stylistic choice or when it insists on no first person). Otherwise, I’m loving the story, keep at it!

super good man

I'm glad to see you're back! This is still one of my favorite stories despite there only being 8 chapters, and you've done an amazing job with the plot, the originality, and even the small details. Keep up the great work! You don't have to feel obligated to update regularly, since after all, you are the author.

Quiero más! Llevo unos años buscando este fanfic pensando que terminó, o progreso más de lo que recuerdo pero al menos sé que aún hay esperanza para ver nuevas actualizaciones.

I have no clue if I'm the first, but welcome back Morris! I must admit, I have been waiting for this. I loved this story, and I wanted to see it through! Glad to see you back!
Your ever faithful reader,
Manaphymajic1999