Awesome

Oh yes. I approve of this oh yes.

I have read this before but I didn't add it to my favourites, but I will now after reading it again :D very good and steamy :3

really good u should make story like a book or somthing really amazing work

You had me at the second paragraph, SO DAMN HOTTTTT! Love the way Fang plays with Light's navel piercing :)

Fang has Lightning around her finger *nose bleed*

KEEP EM CUMMING! (yes, that kind of cumming)

nice :B

YOLO GOOD

awesome i love this - it is well written and easy to understand! - i hope this is not just a one chapter thing cos i mean this def needs more chaps! and also i agree with the first review have Fang lick it off her hand cos that would be hawt. but anyways keep writing!

It is nice but short. Why did Fang swipe Lightning's juice on her own thigh? I think she's more likely to put it in her own mouth ;).