Interesting storyline

Believe it or not I was putting off the end of this because I did not quite believe it could live up to what it should have been, but hot damn did it meet expectations and beyond! So glad you kept it just them and did not bring any other characters into their moment.

Wow this is the best most moving chapter. It is just so touching and I can relate to so very much of Bella's relationship and memories of her Dad. I have such great memories of being at Disney World with mine and just wow...

I really enjoyed this. He was so incredibly sweet. Glad you decided to share more of their story.

OMG! They finally meet in person! I know it's been a long time since I read this or even left a review. My laptop died as did the borrowed one from work. Now I finally have a smartphone and trying to figure it out and how to maneuver ffn mobile on it because it's waaaay different than being on a computer! Lol

The cookies sound like they are so artistic and cool looking. I wish I could see them. Maybe I will see if the fb page is still up and scroll through the pictures if they're still available.

I understand Edward wanting more from Bella, to actually meet her, see her up close, and not just through writing. Jasper is also right in that the boys have worked so hard on their soccer for the camp coming up. He can't just throw that away, and he needs to tell her now about it and that he will be away for it so she can prepare for it.

That's so horrible! For them both, too, as she is stuck in not knowing what each day brings, and he for feeling so helpless although he wants to be there for her so badly.

:( Poor Bella. She has so much on her shoulders, but will not give up or abandon her Mother. I wouldn't either if I was her. I wish I would have had the chance she has, but I didn't, to tell her Mom goodbye when the time comes.

Jasper is a great friend, and intuitive to his friends' needs. Good guy.

I wants this relationship between them to progress, but I also want Edward, Jasper, and Emmett to go to soccer camp as they have planned. They have so much riding on it this summer, their futures.

LOL All this time Edward has been so worried about the guys finding out about Bella, and Jasper was so kind and supportive...except when laughed at Edward's drunk ass telling him about his drummer girl.

It's 4:30 am, Edward is asleep in his own bed, so why is Jasper sitting in Edward's room reading his stuff? And why did a door just slam? lol Danged night owls. Ruh roh...Edward missed his nightly letter exchange and watching Bella. I hope she isn't upset.

I love the visuals of his dream! I love your imagination, too. :)

The only grammatical or spelling error that I caught was routing instead of rooting.