love it!

The story was pretty good, and well written. I didn't see any grammar errors, and the word choices were great. I like Susan, and how she decides to stay in the end.

You made a pretty good point on the Daleks from that serial.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story.

It was a little obvious that something was off with the daleks right off the bat (because they didn't know the Doctor).

An excellent, well-written story-it was great to see Susan again! I do hope she is present, either played by Carole Ann Ford or by someone else (since she can regenerate) for the 50th anniversary! 10 out of 10 stars for this story, by the way-not a rating I often give to Dalek stories, since I think they're overused, but the interaction of the other characters was well constructed.

Loved reading this! Out of curiosity, how come it keeps popping up as being updated? Its been 10 chapters the last few times...? O.o just wondering. :X

Despite lack of Jack, best Susan Story ever, I really like the first part.