Suggestions? No. Criticism? Nah. Concerns? None. At. All. Great chapter!

Really like it!

This story is so unfairly underreviewed! I really the different take you have on the whole story

Your way with words is remarkable. I especially adored the first chapter; the fluidity of your writing was beautiful, so poignant and vivid in it's imagery. The way Annie's distinct personality is portrayed through her narrative really sets the tone for this piece and gives it momentum. And the steadily building tension in Annie and Finnick relationship is luscious. I really do look forward to reading more.

YES! This is perfect. The allusion Finnick and Annie's past (or rather Finnick, Mitch, and Annie) in intruiging and the pesent situation in which Annie finds herself is gripping. We all know the general story, but the specifics remain up in the air- for you to fill in for us readers. Please keep this up! It's been a joy to read so far.