Wtf with the ending chapters. The story was really enjoyable... but what is Dumbledores punishment. Where is Paradise? I understand you really wanted it done but a clearer outline would be nice. That being said I loved the story... just hated the last view chapters

Great till the last chapter. That kind of lost me. I need to know more of battle for it to make sense. For me, ending it with him charging the crystal would have been better than the “some lived, some died, but we won” thing. Loved the rest of it. Character growth felt real enough with believable pacing. Thanks.

Very good! I'm favoriting this! Just thought you should know, though I've got no idea how to explain why I like what I do.

Poor Harry, at last you made it a fun read ;-)

I hope that this is not another Dumbledore is the real bad manipulator. Wait, thats not right...i mean i hope if this is about bad Dumble i hope that you don't let Harry just ruin every of his plans without trouble. I've read too many of those stories were a powerful Dumble was outwitted by Harry.

Definitely reading more...

I begin to to like this story.

A promising start, now lets read some more

What happened? This is screwy?

Flitwick was lacking. In height and in existence in this chapter. I can't believe Harry is campaigning for sociality; he's so conceited. If I were at Hogwarts I would abuse Harry.

Okay... seriously... FLITWICK SHOULD BE TALLER. And I wish Katie would DIVINE all the words I didn't know. Harry Potter's search to become popular? That's not conceited at all. Sarcasm. That's original.

I think Harry is just a show-off who thinks he should be popular. Really, he's a very selfish character who wouldn't know what to do with his life without wizardry. Professor Vector. Magic. Hermione should have appeared. Professor Flitwick should be taller.

I love this story, It's well written and I'm very glad that you ended up finishing it. I can imagine that not every person reading this will like the ending, but I do, I'm glad that not everything stayed happy and cheerful, a war is happening and nothing stays happy - things go completely to sh8te within minutes. I don't think that people would understand that this story is about Hogwarts not each and every child and student and teacher.

Thank you for posting this story and I look forward to reading more of our stories :-)

I am dissapointed. Between chapter 36 and 37 is so much story-space left and no understanding after the last sentence on chapter. Please, you had me totally confused. I don't get it together. For me - there feels like there is somewhat just a little too little-knowing before the ending. I miss the real connection between the both last chapters. Or perhaps I am the onle one dummy that don't know. Perhaps.

:/
I loved your fic, it was very interesting. Until the last chapters. I am sorry to say i was very disappointed with that ending. :( It made me very sad. I wish there was more. More chapters before the end, and more happinnes. I didn't realize it would go like this, from the beggining. Not even from your tip about our not liking the ending.
However, i realize that every author has their own style, and their own point to make, and i can't blame you for that. Thanks anyway, for writing.
Now i am going to look for a fun fic to read. I am sad now. :(