This was amazing. Suddenly casting Toph as a really buff man makes perfect sense. I love how absolutely idiotic and over-the-top Pu-on Tim is. Not even Zuko is this dramatic!

Poor Agent Tsen. He just wants to go home.

This makes me want to write my own version of events that lead to this guy writing the horrendous adaption of the Boy in the Iceberg. He had to have gotten some kind of 'help' to reach the ridiculous conclusions that he did.

Okay, as a fan of your other story on the Dai Li and of your writing it was only natural that I read your other avatar stories. And as usual, even when the great Minnichi is expieriencing writers block, she still manages to do a AMAZING job! I absolutely, positively, LOVED this and thought that you made a great piece of art as I will now call it. Just... amazing! And if you can find the time, please continue!

LOLZ omg WOW i never woulda thought of pu on tim being like that. i wonder who he tortures in the south pole XD

This is, without a doubt, one of my all-time favorite stories on this site. :) The melodramatic writing, our over-the-top protagonist, every single little detail and conversation...I LOVE IT ALL. :D

The way you portrayed Pu-on Tim just makes him so gosh darn likeable. :3 I enjoyed reading this so much that I was smiling the whole way through. :D You MUST continue this; absolutely brillant story, minnichi.

Flameo, my friend. FLAMEO. :)