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SpeedyMcCoy chapter 5 . 6/21 The least expected thing I thought I would have to encounter is a blue streak reference in a Naruto Xover fic |
Ezezee chapter 5 . 6/6 The power of broth compels you... Comedy gold |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/24 That bit at the end was brilliant |
xmenavengers2 chapter 5 . 12/12/2018 could you post the next chapter that its a very good story |
Warning chapter 5 . 1/2/2018 There is case of plagiarism. copying another's work or borrowing someone else's original ideas. Swords of Heaven by Nexus Gundam and gundam knight Chris The most critical theory is gundam-knight-Chris the one who wrote the would story Chapter 12: Battle of Narita and war Source of Evidence came from review section by Mandalore the Freedom Here is statement "Why do I have a feeling it was Chris who wrote that line what Talon said about Mandalorians -_-" Those mean? That gundam-knight-Chris the one who would wrote the chapter and the one who plagiarism?. Well for my opinion both gundam knight Chris or nexus gundam are both plagiarism each chapter from another author?, I don't know maybe gundam knight Chris the one who plagiarism or. nexus gundam, Here the version of gundam knight Chris and nexus gundam Chapter 12: Battle of Narita and war Chris could hear the quivering in her voice as she continued. "So what's the use of it? A name? But why…?" C.C. wondered as tears actually began to slide down her face. Chris reached out and wiped away the immortal girl's tears, drawing her attention back to him to see him give her a warm smile. C.C. could see the eyes that were the same shade as blood, gaze at her with warmth and tenderness. "It's proof that we exist." Chris started, rubbing his hand against C.C.'s tear-streaked cheek. "Proof that we exist?" C.C. wondered. The red-eyed teen nodded. "A way to acknowledge who we are to the world. Those who use titles or names to identify themselves forget who they are, their hopes, and dreams. They become a symbol or ideal to the people around them, but no one will ever really know them." C.C. pondered his words until he picked up his cracked helmet. "This helmet for example. No matter how well people think they know Rebellion, what he stands for, they would never be able to understand me and my true feelings." Chris remained silent for a few seconds before looking at C.C. again. "But now I can see you, not C.C. the immortal, but the girl who has known so much pain, sadness, and loneliness. No matter what happens in the future from this point on, I won't forget or deny who you really are. You won't have to be alone because I shall be there by your side for the remainder of my life." C.C. was touched by the sincerity and love in Chris's voice, as he looked at her with warm, caring eyes that promised eternal love which caused her cheeks to redden slightly as more tears slid down her face before she wiped them away. "Well then, can you do me a favor?" C.C. asked with her blush still present. "Sure" Chris replied with his warm smile. "Can you say it again like you did before? Just once with tenderness like you treasure it in your heart." She requested, looking at the red-eyed boy with hope. Chris nodded as he pulled the immortal girl into a loving embrace, which surprised her greatly as he spoke in a gentle, loving tone. "Cerina," For a moment they sat in silence with C.C. still in Chris's embrace with the only sound being the dripping water that echoed around them. "How was that?" Chris asked, breaking the silence. "I-I-It…it was nice." Cerina stuttered out softly as her blush increased. The way he said it, the tenderness, warmth, and compassion he conveyed in his voice, she had never heard anyone say it like that before. Along with his actions beforehand almost made it seem like the two were lovers, yet he spoke it with so much love to her. It made her heart beat just a little bit faster. Now the original version Resurrection of the Forgotten Chapter 9 C.C. blushed' just the lightest bit at the way that Naruto said her name as she tried to regain composure. "Is that supposed to be a joke?" C.C. asked, managing to suppress her blush. "Like I would care about something like that. After all, I-I...I've forgotten everything, every single thing." The light green haired girl continued her voice quivering as she went on, and as Naruto looked at her intently. "So what's the use of it? A name? But why...?" She wondered tears actually sliding down her face. Naruto instinctively reached out and wiped away C.C.'s tears, drawing the girl's attention back to him to see him smiling gently at her and completely ensnaring her in his gentle gaze. "It's proof that we exist." Naruto started, pulling his hand back but keeping his gaze focused on her, "A way to acknowledge who we are to the world. Those who use titles or fake names to identify themselves forget who they are, their hopes, and their dreams. They might become a symbol or an ideal to the people around them, but no one will ever really know them." He continued as he held up his mask, his gaze shifting from C.C. to stare at it. "This mask is an example of that. No matter how well people think they know Kurama, what he stands for, they would never be able to understand me and how I feel." The blonde shinobi said his attention returning back to C.C. "But now I can see you, not C.C. the mysterious girl with the abnormal healing ability, but the girl who has known a lot of pain, sadness, and loneliness. No matter what happens in the future from this point on I won't forget or deny who you really are. You won't have to be alone, if you feel like you're not strong enough to face the world then I'll be there whenever you need me to lend you my strength." Naruto finished. C.C. was touched by the sincerity in Naruto's voice, as he looked at her caringly, promising an end to some of her troubles as her cheeks reddened slightly and more tears slid down her face before they were wiped away. "Well then, can you do me a favor?" She asked him. "Uh sure," Naruto replied, a little surprised she would ask him something straight away. "Then can you say it again like you did before. Just once with tenderness like you treasure it in your heart." She requested looking at Naruto hopefully. Naruto nodded his head once, if he was going to grant her request then the blonde shinobi decided to do it to the best of his ability. Moving a bit closer to her Naruto placed the palm of his hand against her cheek again, an action that took C.C. by surprise, before he took a steadying breath and looked at the light green haired girl softly. "Cera," Naruto said gently. For a moment two sat in silence the only sound that could be heard was the dripping of water that echoed around them. "How was that?" The cerulean eyed pilot eventually asked. "I-I-It, it was nice." Cera stuttered out softly. The way he said it, the tenderness and compassion he managed to convey in his voice, she had never heard anyone else say it like that. That along with his actions beforehand had almost made it seem like they were lovers who truly loved and cared for one another. It made her heart beat just the littlest bit faster. "I'm glad," Naruto said back with his usual fox like grin appearing on his face, before a bashful look appeared on his face. "You might want to get dressed now." He commented a blush spreading across his face as he finally remembered that the girl was naked beneath his cloak. "You can keep my cloak on; your clothes were damaged from the debris that hit you. The top half is all torn." The blonde shinobi explained, making it clear why she'd need to wear his cloak. The only different is dialogue. The word spoke when talk has been shorten. while the scene is same, Another topic gundam-knight-Chris is still use plagiarism from another work and idea and really shock the number fav and fallow are very hight, that kind of thing should not tolerate, sadly many of them still blind, I tried review gundam knight Chris back 2016 still I remember I ask him "why you need to copy another work? From another Author" his do not Answer me instead his just delete my review, Be aware of plagiarism |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/30/2017 Naruto was 12 not 6 |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2017 This is excrement. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 So, does Naruto get revenge? I hope so otherwise there is no point to continue reading this. |
jiubantai-taichoCalmejaneJose chapter 5 . 12/14/2016 Excellent story hope you decide to continue it some day |
Minato 1 chapter 4 . 5/5/2016 Man,awesome I do wonder,does naruto still have chakra? |
Shadowpawzzz chapter 5 . 3/1/2016 Awesome story sad that it ended early at least that arc was finished. |
Liantei chapter 5 . 10/6/2015 This is freaking awesome! This fic had me laughing practically the whole time! I officially love you! This is definitely one of the best Naruto crossovers I've ever read and is definitely the best Green Lantern!Naruto fanfic ever! |
agent of doom chapter 5 . 10/6/2015 Blue Streak reference ftw! Can't wait for more chapters for all of your stories! |
Jewelie-chan chapter 5 . 8/24/2015 Haha! I hope the power of the broth compelled him... Anyway, great story! I was grinning for the whole omake too. I absolutely love your writing style! Dftba! :) |
OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 2/16/2015 quite good. |