Hey man I know you probably wouldn’t even see this but I want you to thank you for all the efforts you put into this story even though it’s incomplete but it was beautifully written I don’t usually review on the stories because I don’t feel like they are good enough but yours was exceptionally good and I feel like your way was how it should’ve went in the anime It just didn’t feel right the way Hinata and Naruto ended up but anyways have a great life man and hopefully you keep writing other stuff like this maybe in the near future

Things i hate about storys like this. Naruto beat pain but loses to no name ninjas. So i guess they could all beat pain too. Guess pain even thou he single handed beat an entire hidden village must be worst then no name ninjas. Naruto with another s rank ninja and an a rank loses to randoms who should be getting one shot.

Love ️ !

It 1 am right now , but I can’t stop reading! Sleep is overrated anyways, on to the next chapters:)

i always hate it that people just assume that naruto and hinata are made for each other when there is no evidence and as far as they know he still like sakura. no one ever conciders what he wants and act as if its in his best intrest. sakura does it out of guilt and the rest just assume it was bound to happen when there is no evidence by this point. other than that this storh is still really good i have just never been a fan of having people insert themselves into others problems for no reason like they do here

I think the reactions to friend trying to set them up is way over the top.

Don't like all the meddling in the Naruhina from sakura and co

I like the story a lot so far. Having Naruto forget stuff after losing control (Hinatas confession) is better than leaving it like Kishimoto did. Complaints, even though Ishikiwa was interesting being Tayuyu father and a stong shinobi who fought interestingly. Naruto was severly underpowered for this fight. I felt like it took away from what Naruto already achieved after fighting pain, ie mastering sage mode saving the village. Made it feel like his strength isn't recognized. Naruto could have clones gathering nature chakra instead of himself which would've prevented him from becoming the priority target. Which feels like what shouldve been done because Naruto has proven his on the fly battle genius. Otherwise I love the story, Naruhina is progressing nicely, I just hope Naruto isn't underpowered. On to the next ch.

Its a really good story. Wonderful and unique..I'm a very sad that we're finishing here but really grateful you wrote this much.

i am giggling like a mad cat. thank you!

Weak naruto lame

Please update. It such a good story

Here is my review, and thank you for the fluff. I enjoy it.

I hope you come back to this it's a great story.

Since this story hasn't been touched in over 4 years, I'm assuming it's abandoned. It's a shame too as I really like this story and was hoping it would continue.