I like how everybody just sort of stares when Dave has a flashback. And now I'm wondering if Equius ever suffered from flashbacks. He's got the right symptoms.

Go Jade and her random end speech! Woo! Hope you can update soon :P

YES. HELL YES. HELL FUCKING YES. AVIATORS FOR THE WIN.

I love this story, but it is confusing as hell. There are like too versions of reality or something :-/

AGAIN WITH THE SHADE WINKING!

But gaaahaahhhhahahhhahahhhhhh this story! What the heck is even going on here?!

I hope Jade makes him replace his anime shades with his aviators. . .

I like this story so far :P Although, how exactly do you see someone wink behind anime shades?

Interesting story so far. Can't wait for the next update

holy SHIT. this is the best forgett fic ive ever read by far. please update soon this is really good

Ugshsbaihsishsaishh UPDATEE

I am loving how this fan fiction seems to be going through, with the flashbacks and all... I love how your writing style fits Jade's style quite well, good job! And yeah, I never really thought that there would be some JohnDave in this fic, I guess it's a great twist for this story.

Hope to see you continue this wonderful work of yours, keep it up!(I'm a new reader, BTW.)

-SL

*Yes, Reviewing Late*

I really love this fanfic!

*Cough*UpdatePLEASEEvenThoughYouHavn'tInLikeAMonth*Cough*

What?

Icky, this fanfic's tough for me, being a huge JohnDave fan and all. I do love it, though! It seems like Dave's being all iffy about it though, but we'll see!

(I've been meaning to review this story forever, sorry for the wait!)

I can't wait to see where this is going! xx

Psh I'll just be called the person..

OOOOOOOOOO cliffy. Nice.

John and Jade are related... (brother and sister I think)

So like I guess Dave really likes their kind..

But the bisexual part took me off.. I never thought of that couple.. (I usually don't think of yuri/yaoi parings..)

Update soon tho, I love it!

OMGGGG UPDATE!

Dude every day I look on fanfiction to see if this is updated. If you don't update soon ur gonna kill me D:

I like it! You did a good job with the characters, and your writing style goes well with Jade. Looking foreward to more. )

OMG YOU MUST UPDATE

FAV STORY NOW :D

yes omfg YESSSS ;_; fhksosuwi happy feels. I love this otp to bits.