yay again

yay!

I rather like Lily

Really good story

Not sure if anybody pointed it out before but I am not afraid of being bitch slapped so I am going to be blunt here.

It is illegal to rewrite an entire book and pretend to call it your own and it will be your own fault if it gets pulled as the does occasional story sweeps and when they do they hit hard and are rude about it.

I am actually being more fair then what happens when they catch someone as they are a big corporate asswipe.

Writing fanfiction is still a *grey* area AS LONG it's not a complete replica but more of what if or in most cases exploring relationships that often end up as annoying soap operas from an 90s dumb sitcom.

A replica with just a few words added or altered is copyright infringement.

This story was perfect again! thanks for making me reread it again i realy loved to, i really enjoy their adventure one more time :D
i love every single bit of this journey! its amazing from beginning to end! you make my weeks a lot more interesting, thanks.

Loved it!.:) very good story!

I sad that this ended but happy that your making another story. Thanks for making the week exciting

Still love this! So where Peter and Lily married in Narnia?

This was an excellent story. :)
Although with how you said that Peter and Lily would court in the Golden Age, I thought that they would be married or something when they accidentally return to England, especially when Peter calls Lily "Love" when they fall out of the wardrobe in the last chapter, it threw me into a little confusion. What I would like to see is Peter and Lily's relationship move forward, you only have small snippets here and there and it is a little confusing to figure out if they are a couple or their not and are just flirting with each other. Hence what I said above.
But besides that, I like your writing style. You definitely should continue, and I can't wait to read the next part of this adventure! :)

loved it

I was wondering, are you writing through Prince Caspian and are Susan and Caspian going to be together?

they're back! i might have freaked out when peter called her lovee c: it was so cute! can't wait for the golden age :D

Peter/lily

Looks like the children are back home, but their adventure in Narnia is just beginning. I good work on this story, I hope to read you next Narnia story soon!

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!