This great some good stuff update soon.

I like it so far..its awesome ...Hina seems like a really cool person..Update soon. Please.

Aww love it! Can't wait for the next update! :D

I really like your story and Hina too. She is really authentic. Cannot wait for more!

I love this story so much! Hina is awesome and should have been in the original story line. I can't wait to see how she reacts to Jacob imprinting on her and how she reacts to all the things that happen in Eclipse and Breaking Dawn. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Good chapter! Please update again soon!

You have to update! Well, you don't have to, but it would be nice. :)

Good chapter! Please update again soon!

Nice twist please keep it going would like to see how this turns out

Omggg good story tone her down abit though she is most deff bad ass an her and leah would get along once she comes along idkk but i would love it if u made one of Noa's friends ask her out and jake get jealous YASSSSS! Keep up the good work and surprise me cuz im most def staying updated on this story P.S i love her name Mahina so exotic but sounds japanese when u say hina

Love them together! UPDATE!

I think Hina is becoming way too loud and in your face. She's starting to become really obnoxius, maybe tone her down a little because right now she's about as subtle as a punch to the face. Reading this chapter i felt like shouting for gods sake let somebody else talk for a second

You have a good story, but dont become too enamoured with your oc, sometimes less is more. When your oc is in a scene no one else gets to have an opinion. you have to let the canon characters have strong personalitys too, at the moment shes drowning every one else out.

I know this review seemed to focus a lot on the negative, but i think other than this one problem you'r story is v good. I hope this review comes across as constructive, it really wasnt intended to bash the story

I just found this story and so far I like it alot. Look forward to reading more.

I love this chapter definitely my fave so far I especially love how jacob ignored bella to walk over to hina I hope there will be more of those moments happening and I hope I won't have to wait too long to find out what happens next so please please with a cherry on top hurry up and update asap...

Can't wait for the next chapter! No joke, this is my favorite Twilight Fanfic