| Reviews for Broken Heart |
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   NatalieLynn chapter 14 . 8/13/2012 Great chapter! At first when I saw the words "James strikes again" at the top of the chapter I groaned thinking to myself, "Has't poor Bella been through enough?" But, you had her be the heroine who saved her and Jasper and finally got herself mentally and emotionally free from James' hold over her. So, between that and the fact that you didn't leave us with a cliffhanger and drag it into another chapter, you earned a big thumbs up from me. |
| ArekWhitlock chapter 14 . 8/12/2012 OMG! This chapt was angsty but it showed how much BELLa&Jazz love each other.. can't wait for more:)) |
| suchasaddeparting chapter 14 . 8/11/2012 WONDERFUL as always m'lady! Ugh I hope that stupid James gets whats coming to him now! |
| kouga's older woman chapter 14 . 8/11/2012 Love it so far! Will be waiting for more! |
| Kelly chapter 13 . 6/23/2012 Damnit danielle... is 14 almost ready? |
| NatalieLynn chapter 13 . 6/23/2012 They actually took James to the same hospital that his victim were taken to? I'm kind of shocked about that. You freaked me out when Bella passed out, and I'm glad that they could repair the damage and that she will be all right. Having her fix up Ben & Angela from her ambulance gurney was a sweet touch. |
| kouga's older woman chapter 13 . 6/22/2012 :-) I love your story! Please keep it coming! |
| foxylady1on1 chapter 12 . 6/3/2012 update soon please xx |
| NatalieLynn chapter 12 . 6/2/2012 Thank God you had this chapter up already after I read the last one! I would have died waiting to see what would happen. I hope James is dead so whether he's in the same hospital as Bella and Em becomes a moot point. I suppose that makes me a bad person to some extent, but since we're talking about a hypothetical situation in a fictional work, I won't let it bother me too much to feel that way. At least if he's dead, the threat of him reappearing won't hang over them for the rest of their lives. |
| NatalieLynn chapter 11 . 6/2/2012 Eek! Nasty cliffhanger! I had a feeling James would be there. I didn't think he'd have a gun though. Exciting chapter! |
| suchasaddeparting chapter 12 . 5/31/2012 GREAT update! ] Oh man you had me all tensed up biting my fingernails off the whole time! I feel bad for Edward though. [ He's gonna be lonely now. Man I really love this story! Can't wait for the next update! |
| kouga's older woman chapter 12 . 5/31/2012 You are an awesome story teller! Fanfic addicts like me always need more or the good stuff so keep it coming! |
| occasional-episode chapter 12 . 5/30/2012 I love it and I can't wait to read your other stories! |
| snoodles chapter 11 . 5/27/2012 WOW, that was intense. |
| kouga's older woman chapter 11 . 5/27/2012 I love your story, please give more! |
