Very good, I hope that this wonderful story continues in the future!

I enjoyed the story up until after they left the fade. Chapter 12 put me off the story entirely due to the whole boss fight as I kept thinking to myself why doesn't naruto just kill him already, and then you suddenly have him die despite easily being able to save Solana and kill Uldred just so you can introduce a "suprise" possession to introduce a demon that was very unneeded when you might as well as left kurama if you were going to go with this. Again this chapter just took all the build up and excitement and then killed it, all the chapters up to 10 I read in their entirety after 10 I just felt the need to skim entire paragraphs because they didn't serve the plot in any way the gravest of this was in chapter 12 during the fight I litteraly felt the need to skim about 1/2 the chapter because their was so much unneeded filler during the fights as well as all the other things previously stated.

I feel like this isn't a Naruto story... So why put it in Naruto.

Not every woman always has a fear of being raped. It's an insult to everyone and it almost made me not wanna read it.

this is stupid. nerfing naruto from the start. whitout Kurama narutos just annoying shitstain

cringy

kek this is ok. but i can see ur politics. oofter

hmmm so naruto is in the fade as well as on thedas and etc? the fuck is this ness

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Is there going to be an update for this story. It’s gotten very interesting and I enjoyed reading it but I want to know if it’s still going.

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should have used the qunari as test subjects for avernus

that was truly sad (emotionally) seriously i've got tears in my eyes from this

Bleach? Really? I had higher expectations...

This story is so boring