This has been quite a different story, to be honest. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it :)

Hi AirmidM!
I wanted to write a review letting you know how much I enjoy your work. I can't tell you how many times I have reread Lies of the Beautiful People from start to finish, maybe 5 or 6 times. I can't tell you how many times I have reread all of your work honestly. You have an amazing talent of drawing your readers in and your ability to bring all the characters to life OC and book characters is so good. Your storylines, basically every scenario you have created and published on her has made me ride that rollercoaster of emotions. This story is honestly in my top favorites that I have read on , and I have have gone through many categories from movies, anime, manga, other books, and many crossovers as well. You and several other authors, I find myself returning to your stories everytime because I know how good it is and I'm left wanting more after every chapter that I read eventhough I know the ending. I just want to thank you for all the amazing stories that your publish on here for us readers, because this is one of my favorite pairings that I am always in search of more. Thank you and I hope you stay in good health during this time.
P.S. I have spent this past week just going through all your stories again, I try to comment and will continue to support you in whatever endeavors you pursue.

please write something about these children?! I'm dying to know what sort of mischief they get up to!

I've only read the first five chaps, but here are my thoughts so far: What I really like is the relationship you show between Ginny and her brothers. I always thought she had a very strong connection to the twins and Bill and you show perfectly. Also I love how Ginny missing her home is presented, and that Egypt actually became her home and how you describe everything about it makes me want to go there as well :D Furthermore, I like how the Slytherins protect each other, it's very authentic I think. What I must admit I don't like so far is that Ginny is calles Gin here. I mean Ginny is already her nickname, why shorten that even more? It's sth that annoys me in way to many fics, but it's nothing major so I just imagine them saying Ginny. Or maybe I just have to say Gin out loud a couple of times to get used to it... Gin, Gin Gin... yeah I think it's working... Gin... well, now I'm thursty :D One more thing: I feal really sorry for Ron and the way he is treated. Imagine being him and your only sister is just suddenly missing and he doesn't know what's going on and why she is gone. She propably believes everything his parents told him. And Ginny on the other hand doesn't know how Ron must have been the last years without her. I just really, really hope they get to talk about it all. It hurts me so much.
What is kind of odd is that Ginny pretty much knows everything. It makes sense she is good at all the stuff she is good at, but it is a lot. I just hope she doesn't turn into a Mary Sue and more character traits will be shown throughout the fic.
All in all, I very much like your story so far. Also I kinda ship Dia and Daphne. Don't know why, but wouldn't that be adorable?

Oh no it's finished Any chance of a sequel?!

I really enjoyed this story...even though I normally go for ones that have more detailed love scenes aka smut in them lol. It was very well written and the plot was amazing! I would love to know the names of all the babies :) and think it would also be cool if you could do up like a family tree or something (that would be one amazing looking tree)! Can't wait to read more of your writing.

i love this story so much, i just read it the second time (:

How do I begin to describe how much I loved this story? It had everything I could want in a story. Action, adventure, the "Golden Trio" being depicted as morons, a beheaded Weasel King, dead "Chosen One", scores of badass women, wizard brother husbands, and Slytherins on top, as they should be. I wish the sequel and one shots would have been posted, I am so sad to have reached the end of this amazing universe you created.

Cool concept here, and I really like the idea of Ginny being taught by Bill instead of attending hogwarts. That said, either your primary language isn't English or you really need to read this chapter out loud. It's very confusing, and does not flow well. You skip years with no scene breaks , and the interaction between the characters is awkward to read. A lot of these problems can be easily fixed by just re reading each chapter after it's been written. The key is to read it out loud so you can *hear* that it sounds off.

All that said, I'm gonna keep reading and hope that the grammar improves over the next few chapters, as I really do like this idea. If it doesn't get noticeably better, well, don't mean to be mean but with over 670 thousand HP stories on the site, I'm sure I can find something else that has actually been proof read. But I will give this a go.

i looked up the desserts that gin and aradia were arguing about, because i guessed you might have made them up, and i was so impressed when they were real. (btw, i'm reading this for the 2nd time cos it's a great story. i love your twist on ginny.)

Oh my lord. even tho its late, reading the story and loving it :)
might i add that even tho im arabic i ended up googling so much of the words you used, totally unpatriotic ;')

I think the two boyfriends thing is a bit out there.

great chapie and title.. yah!

Though I really like your story and its pretty good the whole I'm better then everyone else shtick is making it very hard to keep reading though. I want to see what happens because again its a very good story just hard with Ginny and Aradia being the best at EVERYTHING no one is amazing at everything. If you continue to write try to make it less I'm the best at everything and have it where they have some faults besides their emotions or emotional pasts not everyone just have a bad past but then turn to be the best at every single little thing. Also my vocabulary is wide but honestly dumb it down a little because if someone has less of a vocabulary they wouldn't read your work because you honestly use really large words that most common people would not know. Even though the stories good I wouldn't want to reach for a dictionary every other paragraph. I am trying to be helpful and not just rude I honestly hope this helps you and your future in writing.

love the last chapie.. cant to read the sequel and other ones, too.. great work!