hhhhhhhh why you never ended it... this was a very good fic

well. seeing as how you haven't updated since 2013, I'm upset. i wanted more

Maaaaaan, I can't tell you how great it is to see an interpretation of Wheatley that doesn't try to just explain away his nastier characteristics or pretend they don't exist. Seriously, I always suspected he had entitlement issues, and the way you write him and both deeply insecure and desperate for some kind of control, while still having at least some semblance of affection for Chell is impressive, and imo, very IC. As soon as he expressed distaste for Companion Cube I was like "Hmmmm. Thin ice, amigo." Then as soon as he straight up insulted it, it was "Alrighty then, later jackass."

Is this story done? That's not really Wheatley is it?

I know this fic is probally dead, sucks cuz I just got into portal. But I love this! Is Wheatley really er husband? I'm sure he's hiding something, no way he could be the core wheatley. What is he hiding... :( and i'll never find out.

Please please update this. It sounds like this story could be so cool!

This is interesting. I wonder if the other people in the building were other cores.

This is just a great story, I mean, wow. The characterization of both Chell and human!Wheatley is just so spot on and the tension just has my stomach in knots. The thing I love most about this is that you can understand where both of them are coming from and I feel sorry for the both of them (my heart aches for them both so much). The way you describe the setting and atmosphere is fantastic too; really gives you a sense of the space they're in,

I know it's been a long while since this was updated, but this is just such a great story!

lol

I was looking forward to reading this and Im hoping to see more chapters! This story is going somewhere. :)

This is certainly a new idea. Should've started reading this sooner. Take as long as you need for a new chapter, I can wait. I have Chell-like tenacity for awesome fics. x3

You should update soon. It's really good story.

Ohhhh! This is so goood! :( I don't know why you don't dedicate more of your time to it. It's so friggin gooood! A few editing problems but I still think this is one of the best WheatleyxChell fics. And... I'm just going to say it'd be really good of you to not hint at RattmannxChell because the people who read this obviously don't like that pairing as much... -o-

Hooray an update! I hope there is another one soon lol everything was excellent as usual

LOVE IT! You don't know how happy I was when I saw this in my inbox! Even though I normally like Wheatley being all awkward and shy around Chell, I do quite like your idea of him being a bit of an ass hat :D