Aww, I love when you see different sides of the characters.

Great story I hope that you add another chapter soon

DAAWWWW! It was so cute, really great writing :D

Very cute very cute, I give it an A way to go!

Vary nicely done. I like that it's more in depth and detailed than your other ones. It really shows how you have improved as a writer in the technical stand point.

Good job and I hope to get a new story out of you soon )

aww i love this so caring yet mischevious. good blend.

I really, really like this one! It's a little more subtle than some of your others, but I like that. And I liked the detail of Remy being teased by Illyana. Very nicely done!

Layla

Awe so cute! I love it.