good so far till it got to the little girl, it was just plain wrong so please don't do that again.

Uh, you know there are other fanfic sites around yeah? Ones that allow for MA rated fics. Tons of authors have already been moving thier more mature fics over to these sites since the crackdown began.

You should go to (your fan fiction .com) they allow MA rated stories.

I agree that you shouldn't censor what you write, but I hope you don't quit because I like this story so far. Instead, you should consider moving to . It's just as good as FFnet, but they allow fics with lemons and violence. I hope you don't quit writing because of FFnet's ridiculous censorship.

go to .net

Freedom of Speech !

Don't give up!

Just migrate!

.com

or

.net

They are more than willing to accept FF.N refugees!

Have Hiruko the Bloodline collector (you know the Hiruko form the Naruto movie), Yugito Nii, Fu and Sasuke join Tosagare.

Wow! Things are definitely picking up, here! Can't wait to see what else you have in store! Looking forward to the next chapter!

ARgh, kabuto shudda died. He's even more slippery than orochimaru. Continue writing plz

spiked dildo of revenge... is that a thing now?

another great chapter man, loved it, cant wait to find out what naruto will do when he shows up, or how tayuya will react to konan bein with naruto too, looking forward to the next chapter!

Kill Kabuto the guy is just to much of a threat to be left alive, you cay what he is like in shippuden.

WTF why did itachi and nagato pass out

Fuu and Sasuke are now brother and sister interesting, have Itachi tell Sasuke the truth of the Uchiha massacre.

So Nagato will be with Ino and Naruto will be with both Konan and Tayuya, am I right?