"If Bro were there, he'd smack you on the forehead for being a pansy before proclaiming just how fucking kawaii the whole situation was."- haha, that's hilarious.

Haha, "or when he does the windy thing".

"Jogn Egbert"? lol :p

"you improve your controll over your powers."- control

"You set the bad of groceries down on the counter" - bag

"gives you a wuick peck on the cheek before steping back" - quick, stepping

"sight of an oolder you"- older

Sorry that the review is entirely spelling nitpicks :/

But the ending was really sweet nonetheless. I think it would have been nice to have more sloppy makeouts with present John and Dave though, haha.

OMG! This is the cutest headcanon ever! :'D I am now adopting it ;D Duuuude, I would totally love to read more of this, if you ever get the notion~ I know it says complete and all, but I totally thrive on stories like this :'D