I really liked this. And I'm pleased with the ending.

Again! This was such a great adaptation of your Shepard. I feel like that stoic speech would have been in the game!

This is my favorite chapter so far. Garrus's real devastation...it's so raw. And I just LOVE your Shepard.

I know this story was posted a long while ago, but this is really good! I love how real you made Garrus. The way he describes humans "larva skin". And the fact me make Kaiden do CPR and not him. I just had to say this was a surprising find!

Ahhh what a wonderful story. I wish there was more but it was a good ending nonetheless.

it felt so short but so well done and complete. Lots of emotional punch with few words and lots of potential. Great job

I dont usually read post ME3 stories. However, this was simply amazing.

This is a fantastic story, loved it entirely. Peace out.

No, thank you. This...was wonderful.

BEAUTIFUL! *rapt applause*
Amazing, wonderful, extremely enjoyable read, thank you again for writing this.
Absolutely wonderful.

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When Tali took her mask off, I bawled like a child.
Such an amazing chapter, and such an amazing story, I am overcome with love for this tale.
Absolutely wonderful. I am loathe to read the last chapter, as I know it will be the end. But I must.
Thank you for writing this, from the bottom of my heart, thank you.

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Oh, the end of this chapter was just... Beautiful. Perfect.

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LOVED IT. But really, I did. Excellent work here, and definitely a more satisfactory ending to the story!

Beautiful, beautiful story.
It's almost made me cry several times,
in a good, happy, bittersweet way though.
Thanks for the good read! (:

Short, but beautiful :) Actually brought tears to my eyes!