keep writing this masterpiece!

wasnt Bill the pc guy a pokemon once?

Oak is the pokedex manufacturer.

keep going

YOU LITTLE PIECE OF PICHU SHIT when I saw this I laughed so hard that I went flying of the couch I reading on b-b-but t-the story's over PIKACHUUUUUUU! OW!

That's an excellent chapter. I do hope that Maurice will change baxk to human. One more thing, do you have any updates for this story? I'd like to read it some more. Thanks

Good story there. I was crying quietly when Lukas' mother had died from the battle. Keep up the good work!

This was excellent. Really Excellent. I especially loved your version of how a pokeball works, you clearly put some time into the process. Other than a few minor grammar errors, this was perfect. It's a damn shame this hasn't been updated in almost 2 years now, I really want to find out more. At least it ends on a peaceful note with no cliffhanger so we can draw our own conclusions as to what happens (I won't tell mine for the sake of spoilers).

Ok where to begin. This is yet again another one of the few stories here I've read that helped push me to make an account here. Though I just recently started this one. it didn't take long to catch up to the current point.

The story telling of Maurice is really well told. It's had many great moments of happiness, tragic, and usually really well written emotional scenes. Sometimes it did have me confused, earlier on especially, about what was being said due to a grammatical mistake in places (which isn't bad, but could be fixed with maybe another review). The character development was slow, but that's not bad. In fact it was really well timed which gave us more time to get to know characters rather than jumping right into it. I figured it would only be a matter of time before Maurice became a Pikachu himself, especially after the Pokeball incident. After his transformation into a Pikachu I have to say the story took a completely different turn and has become much more interesting. Since it leaves much more suspense for the story.

Really hope to see more from the story at some point! Other than maybe the grammatical errors or wording it's been really great story so far.

As for the qeustion: my guess is he will remain as a Pikachu. They may (or may not) find a way to transform him back, but will he want to at that point? Then again there's always the thought that he might not be able to if his Pikachu side takes over and starts a family. Dreams are often pretty great premonitions to look at for guidance.

First off, this has been an awesome story so far. Fun fact, I converted the story into an MP3 so i could listen to it whilst I was out and about, the file length is over 15 hours.

I have enjoyed every heart warming and heart breaking moment. From the point that Cammy was rejected by her mother to when Maurice was finally recognized by hes dad and they hugged tightly. You surely do have a lot of talent, and i am hopeful that this story will get a conclusion, even though you haven't updated it in almost a year.

I can definitely see how it can be difficult to continue at this point, since the story can end in so many different ways and there are quite a few loose ends especially with Lucas's dad. The only possible bad ending i can think of is if the whole thing was a dream and maurice is still captured by team rocket.

btw you could definitely make it plausible for Maurice to be able transform at will, Hes DNA already became more malleable after the 1st "pokeball incident". Arceus i love this story man, i really hope you pick it back up.

He's caught the Ashachu disease xD.

Please update. I really love this story hope for more.

Amazing story that I just could not put down.
And in regards to if Maurice should revert or stay as a Pikachu I say give him the option in the end allowing all other transformed humans back, but heart warming experiences convince him to remain as a Pikachu finding happiness in his new found life even if it is against his mother's wishes.
Best of luck in future additions as I look forward to it immensly.

Love the story, any chance of an update in the near future?

YAY! you updated! I would say Give Maurice the ability to change between being a human and a pickachu! that would be AWESOME!