Beautifully written!

That was a beautiful eulogy. Now excuse me but I have to go muder in the worst tortures posible a certain Yuno Gasak. *gins maniacally at said pinkette* Oh my dear Gasai, you are SO GETTING WHAT'S COMING AT YOU.

Thank you for writing this. I could picture it all in my mind- picture Akise thinking this as he kissed Yuki. I love it.

Really,uh, cool, but the ending was miserable. Can you change it so he wins? Please?

Why... WHY YUNO YOU BITCH WHY..;A; WHY DID YOU KILL MY DEAR AKISE?! AND YOU ALSO DARED TO TRY KILL YUKI! Just...why...why didnt yuki believe akise...why didnt yuki kill yuno?...WHY DIDNT HE REALIZE SHE WAS JUST GOING TO REPLACE HIM AFTER THAT?! WHY...WHY, WHY,...why,...why...Why...didnt you save akise...? idiot...why did you trust yuno..?...I remember...'CAUSE YOU WERE WEAK! CAUSE YOU WERE AFRAID TO DIE! YOU JUST COULDN'T PROTECT YOURSELF! THAT'S THE REASON! THAT'S THE REASON...hinata, kousaka,mao,...even akise who loved you more than anything...who could have just run to save himself...who could have given you more and sweeter love that the one yuno gave you, died...because of your weakness, because you were afraid to die, because,...you didnt realize who yuno really was until the very end...after you killed all those friends who trusted you and risked their lives because of you. because of that i hate yuno she brain washed you, she told you not to trust your friends when the person that you shouldnt have trusted was infront of you, you don't really deserve akise, because it was really your fault he got killed, but he still loved you even knowing you would turn him down. At least he died happy and he went to heaven with everyone else, not regretting anything, watching you from above until the moment you became a god. I hope the akise of the 3rd world never met the yuki from the 3rd world so never fell in love of the yuki from the 3rd world so he wouldn't get his heart broken. Akise was too good for you... Sorry i just had to get my pain and anger out of my system ...

I almost had an orgasm after reading this :x Those feelings are so pure. Love it :3 Nice writing style though.

This was so well written. I loved the scene when Akise kisses Yukiteru. Akise was my favourite character; I wish he didn't have to die...

Omg this eulogy is so bittersweet and sad at the same time ;_;

I love the enjambment at the end, fits the scenario so much!

Anyways, awesome story! Keep writing :) this pairing has so much love haha!

Whoa, this is brilliant! Reading the word eulogy makes me sad, but I understand how you feel.. I don't have any constructive criticism to give, since it's so wonderful. Thank you for sharing your work! ;w;

Ugh. I HATE yuno for killing Akise. :(

Poor Akise.

FUCKING YUNO. UGHH

The kiss scene was.. omg when i saw it (in the anime, today)i felt like screaming (eventhoughit it was late...) Akise Aru was and will be forever my favourite character in MN... and if i hated Yuno before... i hated her ten times more when she killed him D':.

As an after though.. i wonder what Yukiteru was thinking when Akise kissed him... oh, and i loved how u wrote him, btw ;D!

Pff, I'm not logged in. In regards to your ending author note; I understand, so did I ):

Pff, I'm not logged in. In regards to your ending author note; I understand, so did I ):

So sad for Akise. I just saw this ep today (3 ep marathon) and it was all so sad. I liked how your portrayed Akise. Good fic!