Wow, I’ve been touching ffn again and reading my most favorite stories... AND I NOTICED THIS ONE HAD A CHAPTER I DIDN’T KNOW OMG O-O that really was the surprise cherry on top of my old re-reads. Guess I should’ve checked my mails more often oooppss. I’m so happy but you left me with a new kinda cliffhanger haha.

aaaaanyways to the story:
I really thought that after their third(!) time they would FINALLY have a talk or just accept that they are unavoidable. It’s really painful to see how they are avoiding getting to the point. Their stupid stubbornness is completely ruining their dynamic and it hurts.

Also I just noticed that apparently Dawn thinks Drew is easier to talk to than May in that matter. It’s the second time she approached him and not May. And while I always liked Dawn and Drew getting along and having this kind of companionship it’s bothering me that Mays and Dawns relationship appears to have become a bit more distant (?) but I kinda dunno when and why it happened. Or is that just May shutting herself in?

I’m just glad nobody caused a scene at the wedding (much... looking at you, Gary). Also wow, Dawn was the one who didn’t care enough, not Paul. Didn’t see that coming. No wait, technically this is a two-way-street, right? So neither of them cared enough I guess.

I’m gonna end the comment on the story part by saying that I have the strong desire to punch Drew Hayden. For various reasons. But mainly for that “I guess that makes us friends with benefits?”-thing *hard facepalm* whyyy can’t he just scratch some of his smoothness back together and be smooth around May once in a while. urgh.
Sooo I hope you’re not gonna make us wait much longer for the great final of this lovely storyand if I haven’t said it yet I’m gonna say it now: YOU are a great writer! You managed to pull a 100k story and make every chapter new, interesting and exciting to read! It’s really hard to put this story down _

ITS BEEN SOOOO GOOOD. But can you please update, I know it’s been awhile but it would be awesome if you did. Thank you sooo much for all the time you have put into writing this amazing fanfic.

A new chapter! :D Wow, it's been so long. Also, this was a good excuse to reread the whole story, because I didn't really remember what was going on.
Yup, Drew realized his mistake and now he knows that Dawn knows that he and May spent the night together. And it's getting really frustrating that neither Drew nor May speak their mind and just be honest with each other. While it's better than not talking to each other, it's still very frustrating to see them dance around the topic of love like this.
Oh, and a small English thingy that I noticed in this chapter: it's making a mistake, not doing a mistake. No biggie, just thought I'd point it out.
Aww, Ash and Misty got married! After only dating for about a year, if my timeline isn't messed up. The speeches were very cute, and I'm glad to see Brock in here as well!
Haha, yeah, Dawn wouldn't leave the issue alone. Smooth save from Drew in front of Gary, though. But I doubt Dawn is going to stop pushing the issue haha. Even though she has her own purple-haired issue to take care of...
Drew is really bothering May, I think he's doing more damage than good, really. I mean, he might think it's funny, but May definitely doesn't seem amused. I mean, she's repeatedly asking him to stop and he just keeps going, that's going to be trouble.
Huh, I don't think I've ever heard of cutting up the groom's tie and then using that to get the present from the guests, but it's a very nice idea. And I liked the bit about the handcuffs haha. And they're going to tell everyone :D
Oh, Paul was looking for Dawn... Hm, I'm not sure if it was really Dawn's fault, I didn't really get the feeling that the miscommunication came all from her side. So that was a bit confusing to me, I don't remember that from the earlier chapters, but that might just be me. And now Dawn has found May, but I wonder who will give advice to who...
Thank you very much for updating again, I really hope that you update soon, and keep writing! ! !

There's finally interaction between Dawn and Paul yay! And the Pokeshipping was just too adorable! Too bad, CS is still on the rocks with all their self-doubts and insecurities on the way. This chapter was awesome and I can't wait for the next shipping moments. Update when you can!

OMG
Super glad to get this email notification! Probably the only MayDrew story that's still being worked on, bless your soul. I've let my own work drop down the drain over the years unfortunately, but I didn't find it worth continuing either. This fic has always been a favorite, so thank you SO much for continuing it! Excited for updates~

U know I just wanna say one thing

Are u gonna write it futher...
Please I can't even recall when I read this chapter last...please update faasssttt...

This is amazing. I read it all in one go and now I will finally have to experience the wait.
Ah well, it's worth it! ;)

Alright, it's a new chapter! It's been a while, over half a year I believe... But I'm very happy you're still writing this story, that's really impressive! And it's a long chapter, too :D
Miscommunication at its finest, or perhaps pride and fear preventing them from saying things would be a better description. They sure make things difficult for themselves haha. And yet they still have these cute moments together, it's only logical they're both feeling confused. Though slowly but surely the evening seems to make some things clearer... They're definitely still attracted to each other, but they're still too stupid to actually do anything about it, frustrating those two. Never mind, I take back those words, May locking the bathroom door behind her was genius haha. We might be getting somewhere!
Yup, yet another one-night stand, but Drew is still afraid... Loved the little bit of Barry, by the way. And a violent princess murdering all the green-haired heartthrob princes was a great sentence as well haha. May is also kind of afraid, but she seems to be less afraid than Drew. Still, Drew is the one to make the first move, coming to bring flowers and all, but now her parents are there! Aaaah, how frustrating! But then May turns up at his door and things are less frustrating again, I'm glad to see May take the initiative as well. But why did that speech go wrong.. How many more misunderstandings is it going to take before they get it? XD
Haha, oh Ash and Misty... While twins or triplets would be very sweet, I hope for them they get one child... To start with, of course. Maybe number two, three and four can be triplets XD
Aha, and some IkariShipping! I'm curious what you're going to do with that. Dawn giving May romantic advice was fun. And at the end... Poor Dawn haha.
Thank you very much for updating, I really hope you update soon, and keep writing! ! !

The tension was extremely suffocating! I was rooting for both of them but their pride just gets in the way ugh. Nice chapter and well worth the wait. Update when you can!

MAYxDREW forever!

Ahhhh! Finally! You went believe this but I literally ditched sleep for this. And it's 1:00 A.M. Chapter is amazing, as always. Hope to see your next chapter soon! Great job.

Ayyyy! Update! Update! Update! Please? It's been 7 months! Where are you?

I can totally understand Pikachu! Hee. Cheers for Dawn for making May and Drew finally try resolving the 'complications'! I couldn't help but laugh at the last scene, especially at Drew's words at the end. I like Cilan, never have considered him to be Drew's (but more of Brock's) replacement in the series. Misty's nervousness is totally justified, and considering Ash being able to be 'subtle', that might have been quiet a big feat for him. Overall, nice chapter! Looking forward for your next update! I hope that your problem will be solved soon. By the way, I absolutely love your contestshipping oneshots! They are lovely. Keep on writing, you're really wonderful at it!

omg I love this series! u are such a creative, amazing writer! :D

I'm so happy this story is going to be continued! Like I seriously double checked my email when it said WDMM Chapter 19 online xD and after that I totally screamed x3
This is a very very interesting story which is quite different and I'm sooo looking forward to read more of it :)

Good luck with your fanfiction problems :o hope fanfiction stops to hate your computer soon cause it really shouldn't, you write great stories!