good story but the ending seems to rainbows and sunshine I feel like whatever the hag did should have done something more then mess with Sam's breathing for a couple weeks

Good for a short story. I liked the ending (but then, nothing ever really ends, does it? ;D)

Cute, soft ending, and of course the obligatory brotherly banter (haha, Dean got punched in the nose -). I confess, though, I was hoping John and Bobby would have a discussion about what exactly happened out in the woods-what the hag had given Sam, the difference between her using spare organs vs. the youth of a living 'substitute,' etc. You know, sometimes so much happens in the thick of the action that the actual explanation is done afterwards. But it's all water under the bridge; I'm not the one writing the story - Thanks for sharing!

~bryne

Great story, sis. Very entertaining. Hah, John's such an asshole. Can't wait for more stories!

Next 100 miles? I give John a couple hundred yards.

Great story totally enjoyed it! Loved it and had fun reading it!

Great story and a very good ending. Sam's right, though. Soon as John gets some distance on how he nearly lost Sam, he'll stop listening to him!

I don't know if I can live with only one more chapter! This story is so amazing, great story, indeed. :)

Yay! I finally understand what happened! Lol I loved the chapter! Sad to hear there is only one chapter left but I can't wait to read it! Update soon!

Always glad to see Bobby. He always has great answers - and smart aleck ones.

Hey I wasn't upset I just thought I reviewed and I felt bad I didn't. I try to review everything but sometimes I read rigtht before bed and fall asleep I am glad you mentioned her you should! Anyhow loving this chapter and the lore of the hag. So interesting!

I suspected that's what the spells did, though I didn't know what the effect would be once the spellcaster was dead (being physical change, the damage could already be done, yada yada). Hags are one creature I don't know much about, so you're not going to get any accuracy criticism from me -

And for posterity, I wasn't offended by the review comment. I'm an actor by primary trade, so I'm bound to come up with snarky remarks to just about anything people say! It's improv training, haha. Update again soon!

~bryne

Great chapter, love it. Always love protective Dean!

Oh no! Is Sammy now blind? Noooooo! He better not be! DX I will be very very sad! T.T please please update asap!

First sorry I didn't review last chapter. I thought I did but had a horrible week. Loved this chapter & can't wait for more.