Reviews for The Secrets That You Keep
CentauRita chapter 11 . 2/2/2013
Beard? I think they both need a close, hugging, shave ;}
CentauRita chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
I can't believe they both got jumped...just goes to show you hafta be on the lookout at all times. Wow, Ed really gave more than he got.
CentauRita chapter 9 . 2/2/2013
Oh my goodness...where did those three words cum from? I wasn't looking...I don't think Jasper was either...bu't't it was sweet and from the heart...Edward's heart
CentauRita chapter 8 . 2/2/2013
Hmmm, I think I need a cigarette and I'm not even a smoker...but that chappie smoked me, but't'...good! ;}
CentauRita chapter 7 . 2/2/2013
Well...may be NOT so rude of another kind of and...awakening ;}
CentauRita chapter 6 . 2/2/2013
**giggles**

I think that Jasper's gonna be in for a rude...awakening ;}
CentauRita chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
Edward, I think, is in for a very rude...awakening! Not unlike Jasper did in his bed that morning. Yes, we shall see.
CentauRita chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
Shaking? That's my shoulders from LOL! ;D

I can feel that Edward is inching his way 'under' Jasper's...skin.
CentauRita chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
OMFG! I don't think I stopped laughing this WHOLE chappie! They both slay me to my laughing core!

My fav this chappie...

He was making me smile in spite of myself, because as annoying as he was, he was pretty funny in a juvenile sort of way.

"Jasper, are you smiling? Holy Shit! You ARE! Oh. MY GOD! "

He rolled down the window of the truck and began yelling, "He's smiling! Oh My God people! Jasper MONROE Whitlock is SMILING!"

And thanks to you, Jen, and these 'boy'sterous boyz...I'm SMILING, to ;D
CentauRita chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
Just a few of my favorite paras...

"Dude, I would. I am tired too and I have no problem with my body, so unless you want to look at my fine form all night long, you should probably find me a sheet or prepare to be dazzled."

followed by...

'Aww, don't be that way! Were you dreaming about me? It's okay if you did, I dreamed about you, and by the way, you might want to wash that sheet now."

and then,

"I need a squirt." **and I don't think it's about soda pop or shampoo, either ;} **

LMAO...

Love Edward's, going commando, cocky, weirdo attitude!

Love how flustered Jasper is with Edward. Edward with probably get his wish...Jasper 'coming' to him ;}
CentauRita chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Wow...fist-a-cuffs for the...**cough,cough**...first time ;} That was a low blow there, Jasper...could be consider, breaking and entering unlawfully.
mommatri chapter 11 . 10/21/2012
Just found this story and I like it very much. Are you going to continue with it? Just asking, because it's been awhile since you have posted anything new. Sure hope so.
ArekWhitlock chapter 11 . 7/12/2012
Totally loved this chapt:))
can't wait for :)
Rashell
pezlover chapter 2 . 5/30/2012
Holy hell...these guys are funny. Great dialogue
Mistydeb chapter 11 . 5/29/2012
Great chapter, they really need to get out of there before one of them gets seriously injured by their so called colleagues. Thks for the update, Debbie
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