This is such a good short! I really like your writing, thank you so much for writing this!

This was a wonderful story...Great job!

nice story loved it. that message at the end is how i feel too. * sigh

Fuckin love this shit :)

this is my second favorite story

This is a beautiful fic that depicts the epicenter of how ash falls into what he fight's the most in the series. (lonelyness abuseive pokemon trainers and the i dont need friends thing.) I think it's jjust a fantastic fic that capatalizes the age old greek hero in mythology. A larger than life hero who sets the stage for everybodies father quest. (quest to find ones self) I must say this is a fic that peeks my interest and has my mind begging for more. Well done.

I enjoyed the story

Awsome story, and a awsome ending. I look forward to reading your future stories... Rock on for life...

Hahaha! I find it hilarious that Johanna could figure out every single thing that was going on between them!

Great story!

That was cute. :)

i really like the chapter, especially the last sentance

Well by the looks of it this story is about to close for good. It's always the awesome stories that end the fasts. Can't wait for the next ch... Rock on...

I guess Ash is in it to win it. Can't wait for the next ch. This story is getting really good... Rock on...

This story is getting better and better. Can't wait for the next ch... Rock on...

It's only the second ch, and I'm hooked... Rock on...