Fuck off
You need to balance your story,
First off how did naruto lose his memories in the first place? Dimension travel does not work like that unless a severe head trauma was acquired
Second Rinnegan? Really talk about pathetic
Thrid your characters, oc are all fucking annoying
All in all you are pathetic and go die

Honestly this story is getting pathetic

naruto in your fic
male : they are evil
female: will spread their legs for anyone, and they are are good beings

lol author lol

I don’t get why u say not godlike when he would be godlike when he’s like 13

if he has his powers he will be the closest thing to god like on the planet so I don't see how you can say he isn't god like.

the story is interesting but you would think naruto would have a moe profound efect on the people around him not just cannon characters like why didnt he save more people type thing

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is this your story?

Memory does not work like that! You can't just lose it because you're in a different world

This chapter could of been written way better, main problems was with your interactions with Kurama and Naruto

i'm sorry for your family's death i hope you feel better one day

Naruto should stop abusing the rinnegan abilities like save it when he actual needs it cuz hes beem using bansho tenin so much

Ok, so I'm going to have to point this out. Naruto has the Rinnegan, his ridiculous reserves of chakra, and destructive jutsu that could lay waste to quite a bit of land. How is that not god-like?
Don't get me wrong, I love OP and Godlike characters, but your statement just made me wonder.

Please update soon I'm sad it hasn't been updated

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I'm sorry to hear that but it's not my place to say, coming from a stranger and all.