THIS IS AMAZING! ERMAHGERD. Wouldn't you just love Eoin Colfer and Derek Landy to team up and write a joint Artemis/Skulduggery book?

Skulduggery Pleasant and Artemis Fowl, together!? I think that I may faint from the shear amount of epicness that this will bring. Also, the shear amount of banter these two could do. Overall, this is in my top three favorite stories.

could be longer and more detailed...

could use some work...

great

Hmmmmmmm.
I am really liking this story! good plotline but work on grammar please! for example "actuallys" (leave out the s). I think Artemis needs to be a bit "colder" if you know what I mean. I understand that he gets more friendly as the books go on but still...
Other than that it is really good! I wish I could write like that!

I might trace and report this to my bodyguard, Domovoi. You won't want a visit from him.

Please update that's really good

that was awesome but I wish it had a more understandable ending.

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i think Artemis seems a little childish

:D its so damn good

yayyyyyy! i love this story! '' big whoop - I have wings too!''

answer that Arty, answer that.
amazing!

gasp gasp gasp! Ghastly, an ELDER? wow! i mean( SPOILER )Bliss would have been good, but he's sort of dead, but ghastly is also really good if you think about it.