I know you posted this ages ago but... THAT WAS AMAZING! Its like the best one I've ever read and I have read ALOT you should write more :)

gale all the way

I loved the dream part of the story

I like the story so far but im more of a katniss/peeta not katniss/gale

OMG. I THOUGHT GALE WAS DEAD FOR A MOMENT THERE, YOU HAD ME SCARED. *calms herself down* Are you gonna write more?

Yo update!

I really like this and it's very well writting! :)

Ps: thank you for your review :D

HOLY CRAP YOU HAD NO IDEA HOW FREAKING SCARED I WAS UNTIL I READ THE LAST TWO LINES. Oh my gosh. I was like, "HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!" But then, it was just a dream... OMG. This was a really great chapter, and the next one should be about Gale going on some hunting trip with his buddies or something, and then some Peeta/Katniss action somehow... I just want some jealousy and bad choices thrown around, if you know what I mean. Okay, wait, that sounded bad. But like, Peeta wanting Katniss back or something... Okay, I give up. I suck at story ideas. But, please update soon, because you're an amazing writer!

Ahhh that sucks but I understand. Maybe I'll go check out your other work instead.

Hmm interesting start. I liked her dream very much btw. Will continue reading of course.

When people write stories, the hardest part is proably trying to capture what you have in your head on paper( or on the computer) I feel like you did that amazieily!

I really like the the part" I wanted to be that girl in the dream, not the dull lifeless one I was now" it got across what she was feeling so well without a big jumble of words.

Well done:)0

wow this is amazing! soo cute :) x

Beautiful! I'm going to continue reading, but I just had to say that that chapter was perfection.

Its sad to see you not continue this. See I read it but I never reviewed so that's why I am now. See I don't really read things about Hunger Games but this was really good :) hope someone gives you an idea so you can continue because I don't want you to end it :)

~Destrier~ :D x

Really good! You have really exciting and creative ideas! But there were waaaaay too many spelling and grammar mistakes! Please fix them! It makes it a whole lot easier to read! I like Peeta more than Gale, so I didn't like the ending so much but the beginning dream part was amazing! :)