Cute

This is so cute. I like how you portray Ino as opposed to everyone else's girly, all knowing, sexpot.

HOTT! Loved Shikamaru's last words! Haha

Hahahahaha -"I never want to hear a noise complaint from you again."- hehehehehehehe

that was so cute I love it

funny

This... is the most amazing smutty lemony fanfiction i've ever read.

This is freaking cute. Temari was hilarious and I loved the interaction between Ino and Chouji. Great job! Definitely going to check out more of your stuff.

This is freaking cute. Temari was hilarious and I loved the interaction between Ino and Chouji. Great job! Definitely going to check out more of your stuff.

it was amazing! I read a few stories of sex between choji and ino ... few have the courage and skill as to write a decent story about them.

was the most accurately, sweet, real sex, deep acting sexy read ... I read a while ago where the characters were just as beautiful as they described I will, but in this conversation between the ino, temari mei and were structured well and talks, so easy and true.

I do not know if you understand what I mean by real, real short, nothing fake or sugarcoated things only the beautiful and harsh reality.

ino in this story is my ideal ino ... especially because after having sex is much safer than what you want!

choji's mother is absolutely fantastic if I should imagine it would be so sweet and sincere woman, who does lots of sex with her husband, that even if you spend years (not that old) has always a lot of tricks up its sleeve.

temari what to say ... I feel like crying ... this is what you get when a bride finds her perfect dress? temari is superb, beautiful, frank, outspoken and sexually active and experienced.

very detailed description of how it feels against ino choji, and shikamaru the differences between him, the fact that she is too ashamed to say that he saw them naked and excited to see the "talents" of choji ... mmmmmmmmm no short everyone talks about how the girls face the subject of sex and how it reacts to the sensations of your partner ... isomma spoken man and the fact that he gets up if he sees a beautiful woman ... but there is also the counterparty who enjoys and desires, as in this case, uncontrollable and essential.

would be nice to do a aocntinuo where the guys talk about that time and their first (and shikamaru choza) and where they share tips with choji ... mmmmmmmmmmmm ''

Very enjoyable

That was so cute and adorable! I love the way you used a different perspective because in every story Ino is always a whore -.- but I loved it!

Nice plot. Cute fic.

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dear lord. thank god I read this. I've always had a soft spot for choji, but DAYUM. that was nice. could use a little more back story, like how in the hell did they get together! but, that is an extremely difficult question to answer. hope you enjoyed writing it, cause damn. that was good.

*5 stars* *****

well, one mistake. last few sentences. "where ARE my dress?" should be where is my dress. props man/lady. you write a sick story.

Hiddnleaf