you better carry it on! It is really good!

Hm.. Why don't you try OneShots, or even reading other DN fanfiction for ideas? Try mine :D

s/8590703/1/Death-Note-On-Crack
(My apparently 'intelligent' crack!fics)

s/8551944/1/It-s-Not-a-Dream
(My oc-in-DeathNote scenario story ;D)

I love your story! I can't wait for Sarah to piss of Light and L at the same time!

Despite what you said, I will review. I can't message or take the poll on mobile as far as I can see. But I really want this series continued. It was the first Death Note fanfic I really got into, so I wouldn't want you taking that away. Please make the story last.

Wow! Really good so far!

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE!

I love this story! Pllllease keep continuing!

All I can say is wow :O I'm in love your story, and you made it original too! That's what I really like :D The ability to see souls, having a Shinigami fly someone to another place, and the fact that Beyond Birthday is a ghost :)
I do agree with you back in chapter 2 in the very ending. There are too many stories that have the Wammy House involved.
I hope you get some ideas in your head soon :D

Wait a minute... she doesn't know colours but she says "A purple, glowing outline of a monstrous-looking creature stood in front of me." How come she knows Envy is glowing purple?

Anyway... other than that part I like it a lot. I'd tell you to update soon but you are uninspired... (I did read the whole thing ) So instead I'll say "I hope you get an idea soon."

Crap.A typ-o.I ment that humans are animals and that some outher animals live longer than us.

K, first of all,humans ARE there are outher animals that live longer thin us.
(sorry,its just this gets anoying after a while.)

i was soooo happy when i saw this story wasn't that old...so it may be updated wooh

kekeke.. got more interesting as it goes.. sorry i review just now. i've read this story 2 week ago and now i come to check it again. i really hoping for an update. please please.. but i'll wait patiently:( what will happen if Sarah err-Sight got the Death Note? i hope Light whole plan will go in fain and L somehow manage to win with her help. :3

I like this story tons. Even more so since you added BB He's my second favorite character next to L. Oh and you kinda Made a mistake in Ch. ...not to be a stickler or anything (PLEASE FORGIVE ME!) But you said Sarah was running down the streets in Whinchester. So
how did Sight/Sarah know about the Kira brodcast?During the confrontation between L and Kira,L says they only brodcasted the message in the Konto region of Japan. Oh and i have a question about Sarah's eyes. I know it's her eyes that make her able to see spirits but what makes her able to hear them? Is it cuz she touched the deathnote? Or cuz like Light Mentioned that because of her disability she can hear better. So did her hearing evolve with her eyes or something? Sorry for the LONG ASS REVEIW the point is i really love your story! Update soon!

:)