Reviews for An Awkward Evening with the Bennetts
JuliusKing chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
I liked the quirky nature but I got the vibe you were taking advantage of what people were saying to explain who said what rather than actually describing scenes in full, and with like 10 people? You really can only get away with that in the most obvious speech mannerisms.
But maybe you just rushed yourself, so i'll say you write well.
georgiacipher chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Fangirling at this so much. this is adorable! the "If you like it then you should've put a ring on it.." part was hilairious jesus christ omg.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I enjoyed it!
Aevr chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
COOL, COOL COOL COOL!
DayDreamer077 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
cute. lol.
Ashley-In-Wonderland chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
can these two please just get together...this is perfect its not over romantic, its exactly what would happen :)
ThisIsALegitUsername chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
This was really sweet!

I loved reading every minute of it!
JustDanny chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Love it!
Arashi Kanashimi chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
OMW! That was so cuddly and fluffy! I loved it! :-)
Crittab chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Cute! I'm glad to see someone finally filled this prompt.

Just to keep everything clear, maybe in the future when you write giant group scenes you could specify who the speaker is more often. I got lost a bit in this one with all of the different voices.
mayday321 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
OMG! This was so funny and sweet. I really loved it.