Wow! Just wow! Intelligent writing.

There were some really nice moments here and there. But, by and large, I found this extremely difficult to follow. I just didn't "get" what you were trying to do with John, which made the story overall difficult to follow.

FINALLY caught up with this and finished it. Very touching! I like it more now that I know what's going on. :)

Oh, Sherlock, I feel you. I don't bronze either. XD

I so totally giggled at the end... That was great. I loved this story so much!

omg i cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yy this is so good damn making me cry in class! pretty good for only having watched the first season. damn all this could have been possible in the series! *wish it did* u deserve the reviews! XD

Lovely (and that's just on chapter 1); just one tiny thing - slinked? Surely 'slunk' for the past tense? Keep going though.

What a roller coaster this is and so tragic. I hope you plan another chapter because your writing is fantastic SH andJW are so well written. Thanks for the story

I am heartbroken.

Please update.

Too tired to make a plea more insistant and convincing. I'm addicted. Please update, make them find each other or whatever you come up with . Please.

(by the way, Hunger Game's fic will be for another day. Have to catch up with my homework for... let's see? 5 hours...-")

Oh! And thanks! Sincerly, deep deep thanks!

I do not usually comment every chapter I read when I have more chapters ahead of me but here... here... I MUST tell you I love your story! Really! So...moving. Touching. So... Argh, can't even describe it! One of the version of the post-fall sotry I wanted to read. hankyouthankyouthankyou. (I know I sound crazy. I don't mind, though )

Here, you made my cry. I'm insanly taken with your story. You can't imagine what it is making me do. Well, not do, in fact. I'm in a real bad situation for tomorrow... XD who cares? I still have 4 chapters! Niyaark! *flying to chapter 4*

(sequel to my PM...)

And you write Johnlock, too? What a wonderful person you are! XD XD XD XD

*going back to reading*

YAY, you're back! I missed you, my dear!

Loved all the feelings and the suspense - you really have a suicide-threat galore in this one, and you always pull it off perfectly. And I was getting the dynamics, no problem, even though I haven't seen the show, and you had my heart breaking for them every few sentences.

I especially loved the argument between John& Mycroft - epic :D

ooh, and this:

"He wondered for a moment if they would feel the urge to drive a stake through his heart this time" - LOL, come to think of it, Sherlock would make a smexy vampire :D

(you're alive!)

While I'm sure a lot of the content is going over my head, I am enjoying what I've read/understood. The clues were cool and your writing style with the messages is good. :D

While I love your writing, I can't really give critique because I haven't seen any of the show. I should, because I'm starting to like this Sherlock of yours. :D I just don't know if anyone is OOC but they don't seem like they are.

Also, sorry I've been behind. There's been a crisis at school.