Lovely! Hope you can update again :)

are you going to update?

I think you should continue. It was great.

More ?

I hope you continue the story, good start!

Once again, you manage to piss me off by not looking at your spelling. Do you even know English? It's not wired, it's weird. Get it right

You were that Alice was singing Barbie Girl in Jewish, which isn't a language. The language of the jews is Hebrew. In Jewish is like saying someone was talking in Catholic. It doesn't make sense. You are in serious need of a beta. Sorry I hate to be spazzing out but as a Jew myself, it's a total pet peeve.

You should continue this story, it's really good!

It's a little different than what I'm usually use to. We all have read the books so we know whats going on and this is actually really good. I hope to read more in the near future.

Oh please please update soon:D:D

I thin you bella, charlie, renne and some of the la push guys should read the books. ;)

la push! la push! la push!

Hi its me the Auther. And thank you for the reviews, I will be updating dont worry. but were i live i have spring break and im going to be gone for a little while. And new characters: I wont put none. )

You have a good write the charectors not neccary at chaptor 2

Please don't make too many people aware of the situation. Keep it within the Cullen family. It'll be more fun to see them struggle with the problems they'll come across when they're the only ones who knows:D