Reviews for Premonitions
HistoryISculture chapter 8 . 5/29/2018
MORE SOON, PLEASE!
lucel18 chapter 8 . 12/27/2017
Thank you so much for this update! I'm so happy to see the notification alert and especially after reading this chapter. Your portrayal of Heimdall's past is wonderfully written. There were a lot of heartwarming and heart wrenching moments, but it was worth my time. I love it! Including funny moments like Thor trying to pick up baby Loki & Heimdall panicking as a rresult. Lol! Thank you so much!
Mistress Charon chapter 8 . 12/27/2017
Yes! You don't know how happy I was to see the notification that you updated! Thank you!
This was an interesting chapter depicting Heimdall, and it was well written.
Anyways, here's hoping you'll continue!
Happy New Year! And until next time! :)
Mistress Charon chapter 7 . 10/7/2017
Oh my goodness! What an original plot! I love the idea of Jane knowing Loki as a child. And child Jane is simply adorable! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, it was interesting and the potential is very good. I'm a little sad that it seems the story's been abandoned, but happy enough to read what's there. Thank you for writing it, here's to hoping that you'll update. :)
lucel18 chapter 7 . 10/4/2017
Lol at Jane telling Eric what Loki said, how proud he is of him with the cat & glue(?). Lol. I love this chapter (actually every chapter you've written). Although it's sad to read about the kind of mother Mary is, I'm so glad that Jane has Frigga, Eric, & Loki too. Thank you for writing & sharing this fic! I look forward to your next update. :)
lucel18 chapter 6 . 10/4/2017
I'm really enjoying this background information into Thor & Loki's past, the strength of Thor's love & loyalty towards his brother and by extension Jane too since she's important to Loki. Love it!
lucel18 chapter 5 . 10/4/2017
This is so adorable! I love this idea of yours, of them meeting while Jane is a young child, of them being like her guardian angels. Thank you!
lucel18 chapter 4 . 10/4/2017
That kind of future is so foreboding. I'm so glad that she saw it, though at much cost to herself & that she's determined to change it. Frigga's a remarkable woman.
lucel18 chapter 3 . 10/4/2017
Ugh, Odin. I don't like you here, lol, but Thor, I love you and your declaration of brotherly love for Loki no matter what he is. Some children are blind to prejudice or racism.
lucel18 chapter 2 . 10/4/2017
Frigga's use of an illustration before telling him the truth is a wonderful way for him to be more accepting of the truth. Intriguing ending to this chapter.
lucel18 chapter 1 . 10/4/2017
I love this Frigga who has a take-charge attitude. Great start!
Chiafun chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
i love how frigga gives motherly advice to lil Jane. i always loves frigga, she seems a decent parent tham odin.
PureSummerMagic chapter 7 . 11/26/2016
Such a lovely surprise to see an update for this story! I hope we'll see another one soon. :)
jzygadlo23 chapter 7 . 11/26/2016
Thank You for this fic, but now i want to know WHAT COULD ERIK HAVE DONE WITH GLUE AND A CAT THAT WOLD MAKE LOKI PROUD?
HistoryISculture chapter 7 . 11/26/2016
More soon please i love this.
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