Great story. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.

I saw other discovery whatevers they had better continue this. Good story like your writing.

Yes. Okay now what. Last chapter you say. So many questions. If they don’t get to be partners, best friends, lovers, married I’ll delete all your stories and ignore your writings.

Sarah should get Chuck to ask to meet Orion.

Come on Chuck you have all the cards tell them you’ll do it only if Sarahs your partner. Sarah he might be a drooling vegetable tomorrow so take him to your room and tell him you love him.

The things I don’t like in the stories, I believe Bentley is all of those things. She needs to listen to her feelings and talk to Chuck.

Given a choice. Untested science. Still want to turn him into a killer. He’s in love and if he doesn’t do it may never see her again. Your making this very hard.

The Red test, hope this is something made up. Do not like this any more than when female agents are instructed to “ seduce” a mark. Your portraying of Sarah with a conscious and developed feelings for Chuck is rewarded and shows she is a living breathing person who can love. Sorry got sappy just they should be together just as Leonard and Penny do.

No problem learning how something works. He’s just learning a skill.

Does she realize he’s hurt over her? Liked the chapter. Drawing a blank on what to say. Does Bryce and Chuck get to meet

Actually went through the farm. That’s different. Still the outcast. Is his dad one of the inventors of it.

A selection and review for candidates. A spy with a conscious.

Is Bryce already recruited?

Well done. Another excellent story. I def can't wait to see what happens next in Building Rome. Great job and thanks for writing!

This is a really good story, well I read it under two days, so I thought it was good and original, for me anyhow.
No love triangles, PLI's or LI's, just a good C/S story, pre canon, I will have to check if there is a follow up story.
I highly recommend this is worth a read.