No! that can't be it! please more!

please update

This chapter is 'too perfect'. Get my pun? But seriously! It's so good! One of the best YJ stories out there. Have you heard about the new season? I hope that'll get you interested in this story again ;)

This is your best chapter yet. Seriously. Kaldur's part was on point ;)

*cries* not updated in two years. Is this disontinued?

I totally agree with your view of the second season, even though I missed M'gann's changes till episode seven or so. N1

A lot of chocolate cookies for you

DSFUGEUISDGH! GAH! NO! I need more! Oh my goodness, this is so amazing. I am just, gah! I have loved this story, right from the first chapter. The writing is superb, and I love how you get into each character on their own, none of them really shining out and taking over, so we get some love from everyone.

During that first chapter with Batman and Flash, I was so excited to see them and that the simulation wasn't real. I came from the prompt on the other website, which said it didn't matter if it was actually real, or some villainous ploy. It wasn't until later that I actually read your summary, which kind of made it obvious the perfect world was fake.

Anyways, I just love this idea and story concept. It reminds me of an idea I have that I want to write, where The Light and Cadmus got a hold of each of the sidekicks really before they became sidekicks to their mentors, and were being trained, thinking that Cadmus works with the League while at the same time slowly being turned against the League, being prepared to join Cadmus and the Light. It sounds complicated when I try to compress it, but reading this story has given me motivation to write it. So, thank you.

And even though it hasn't been updated in years, that's okay... I'm happy that I at least get this much to read.

omg it's been three years since you last updated pleeeeeeeease update I love this story

It's a mite bit late to be hoping for a new chapter, but I stil want to say that I enjoyed what you have posted. :] Good work.

This is amazing and thought out way more than most fics! Update soon:)

This is good. So good! Please come back and finish it.

Damn it, update already.

Hi. I don't know if you'll read this anytime soon, but this story is just so good. I really hope you update soon, because I'd really like to see what happens next. :)

I love the idea behind this story and cannot wait to read the rest