| Reviews for Mr Green Eyes |
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   louanne61 chapter 8 . 5/27 I found this story and I love mafia stories. But ive got as far as this chapter and im going to have to bow out. The story isn't realistic for a mafia story there is no way that a mob member would tell someone about them being in the mob, they could be a cop or feds it just wouldn't happen. Also you maybe should get a beta or pre reader you have made a lot of spelling mistakes. |
| Jenn Jean Cullen chapter 33 . 1/22 Awesome story! |
| ClaceLover08 chapter 33 . 7/11/2019 i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Bella & Edward have Three Beautiful kids |
| StoryMilkiway chapter 9 . 4/26/2019 I like this story but I cracked up when Edward yelled "Beatiful!" As she was giving him a bj LMAO |
| bella's beta chapter 32 . 4/4/2019 Just wow |
| bella's beta chapter 33 . 4/4/2019 What a story! I loved it! |
| trademark426 chapter 33 . 10/29/2018 There are so many plot holes in the story .. we never find out who actually killed Charlie. What ever happened to Angela? Did Edward kill Alastair? And the mafia side of the story is completely unrealistic. She never has any guards, he never has any guards... there’s absolutely no background to the mob when Edward took over or anything |
| dnmann chapter 33 . 7/6/2018 Good story. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/21/2018 OMG Bella is so embarrassing! She says "so uncomplicated it!" to Edward. UncomplicateD LOL You don't need the extra D at the end uncomplicate works just fine, no need to make bella sound like an uneducated moron. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/21/2018 Bella FELT like she was being grabbed by behind...as in she wasn't sure? What a strange thing to say. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/21/2018 Im not too sure I want to keep reading. Every other word out of Edwards mouth is beautiful and its really fucking annoying. Hi Hello beautiful um You got something on your mind beautiful Well im a waitress Beautiful, Yes I know beautiful Well im a shitty waitress Oh im aware beautiful, you let our food sit for over five minutes beautiful. Beautiful your a really shitty waitress beautiful...its an easy job beautiful its amazing that you can fuck it up beautiful. Ya, its kinda like that. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 im confused. Bella says that they had money but yet when he dies renee has to sell her rings to leave? If Charlie had money she wouldn't have had to stick around to sell her jewelry...she could have just left. And will or not their married so everything would become hers. |
| Guest chapter 33 . 6/3/2018 Where is Bobby? |
| Azlady2003 chapter 33 . 3/19/2018 um what happened to Angela...im guessing since Laurent was a cop she's not dead...and Sr said he didn't hire Angela or employees her |
| AndreaO22 chapter 33 . 4/18/2017 The writing and grammar of this story is so bad but I found myself staying for the plot. I wish you would write it over with an editor. |
