Interesting.

The feels. They burn me. The feels.

The only critique I have is that I wished Gwaine had a part in this. Other then that, it was perfection.

I love reading stories detailing Merlin's awesomeness. This was all quite wonderful, really. I suppose the only thing I wish I could have read was perhaps Gwaine and Arthur and their feelings for dear Merlin. :)

Thank you for posting!

Ow!
You forget to write Arthur's POV!
Anyway...it was realy nice, even oyu didnt put Ganwie in it...

Kiss!

Aww, I'm trying really hard not to cry. That ending was so incredibly beautiful! *sniffs*... determinedly not crying... *sniffs some more*. The rest was similarly awesome too; I love the idea that everyone loves Merlin because really, I think you could examine every single character and they would all love him somehow... he's just too lovable
Thanks for the brilliantness and the truly beautiful ending... I havent read such a gorgeous Balinor-ending since... well ever :)
x

I really loved this. You chose very interesting characters to focus on, and it worked splendidly. Good writing!

very nice! well it's already been mentioned but I felt that gwaine should have been in there..(and the dragon is technically not a man but that was interesting) I loved that you put edwin in there! I loved his character and was desperately looking for fics with him. however, I loved will's part the most, it made me feel all fuzzy inside(and then a bit sad..), anyway, interesting idea and execution. good job :)

That was lovely! :)
But I think you should make that plus two after, as I'm quite certain Gwaine loves Merlin too! LOL
Nonetheless, ending it with Balinor, his father felt a lot more heart-warming though! :D

LOL The one with Edwin was a bit surprising. XD But I love how he hated Arthur there for what he would do to Merlin in the future... and Kilgarrah's love for Merlin was simply beautiful. :)

That was excellent. Very well written.

Wow... where to start? I was surprised at Lancelot (I thought it would be Gwaine) and I was VERY surprised at Edwin (the thought never crossed my mind) and I was EVEN MORE surprised to find that it worked really well. (I feel the need to point out that the dragon isn't a man but still)

Well done ... I can honestly say I have never read anything like it before and I really enjoyed the different levels of emotion and the different types of love you got from these characters.

Really good job

Tibbins xx

Aww, these were really sweet. I especially loved the one about Will, very emotional. You're a great writer! Love to read more from you soon!

Rachey Ayy xx

Aww, these were really sweet. I especially loved the one about Will, very emotional. You're a great writer! Love to read more from you soon!

Rachey Ayy xx

very well done im impressed i mean you put everything perfectly.i really wish i could tell you just how awesome i think this is that is all. keep up the awesome wrighting and keep being awesome sincerely one hell of an otaku

Holy shit! This fanfic was so great! I actually didn't want it to end and i want it to last forever *-* anyway, great job dear!

Oh my gosh, this was a great piece! Good Job!