It is a pity that you did not complete this story. It had a chance of being an excellent & wonderful story

...was all she wrote. Oh well, it wasn't moving so fast anymore; since Kazutaka's been convinced the next order of business would have been to get Kurosaki to do something hellish, I suppose. Why was he so casual about that thing if it was the so very valuable thing his boss wanted so particularly? Maybe just arrogant. Maybe screwed up and then didn't want to tackle Tsuzuki?

I hate an unfinished story. It feels all wrong. I gave the reviews a glance and nobody else has nagged you since the end of last year, so I'm guessing it never will be finished. Oh well, as I said.

Trisak out.

Dah! Kiss? Well, he always was a sensual person. I guess I'm not that surprised. Although, given the look of Muraki in the anime flashback to the time Saki tried to kill him, I wouldn't have guessed him at more than thirteen. Seems to be a few years older here, though. Whew. Scarring, though.

That aside, Watari and Tatsumi were funny, although the insufferable suggestiveness of Watari is, as far as I can tell, pure fanon. Hisoka's moral dilemma over waking Kazutaka was nice. Aw, fudge, this is too old to be worth reviewing. Just like Things We See. Your account is still active, though, so I guess you'll get these.

Oh, yes! And you cannot get DNA from hair. Common fallacy. (Fallacy to which the creator of this particular universe subscribes, for that matter.) Forensically, hair is ranked really low-level because it CANNOT be absolutely individuated. If there is no root-bulb attached, it's only good for general color and general gauge. Possibly you already knew this, and just went ahead because they had Muraki's hair and not Muraki. Maybe the Muraki hair had root-bulb attached?

Yow. Evil Hisoka is going to do something bad, and I'm worried. His existence itself is traumatizing. Poor Kazutaka. You're really good at this. If it wasn't fanfiction this would be completely overdone, but it is fanfiction, so it's fine. The bent-around like-Kyoto is a good touch, and the strangling was efficient. Did I mention poor Kazutaka? I hope his Tsuzuki survived.

You didn't finish this, did you? Not at this pace in four chapters.

*whistles* This alternate Hisoka is so sick. I always thought he could have gone 'round the twist if he'd lived, but this is a bit much...but then, I have an alternate-world Tsuzuki-Muraki friendship setup that's even more of a stretch in progress, so no worries. Except I'm surprised Kazutaka came out so much like Hisoka. He DID have his mother. Anime canon?

I hope you finished this. There never was an eighth chapter to Things We See. (Which I didn't review, for reasons unknown to me. Oh well. It was excellent. Didn't need me.) Yes, that key-cross is some plot device. But I'm swallowing. Poor Kazutaka. Just how strong is Saki?

i just finished reading all four chapters to your story and it was the most amazing spectacular thing i have read. the idea of the AU characters coming into contact with the canon universe chapracters has never been done at least not to my knowledge and it is a stroke of sheer brillance. so, i'm doing all this sweet talking to see if i can get you to maybe continue and update story. because i just love the way you have the AU characters. is tsuzuki in the AU dead or does kurosaki have him hidden? or maybe saki is the one that is holding him prisoner? will kazutaka return to his own world? will the others be able to return to their own world? this story is just too good to leave on the junk pile.

please please please please could you update. pretty please.

wow! this story is so good1 I hope that some day you decide to contiune it as it has a lot of potential to become a amazing story as it already is. _

I am not one to really like H/T closeness. I am more a M/T myself. and you have given us a taste of both. Even with the little fluff you added for T/H. This story has caught my interest and that is really hard to come by with T/H within it.

I do hope to see more from your talent on this story and maybe more T/M cutness along with it.

Woo boy, did ya know that 2 and a 1/2 years have passed since your last update? XD T-T

Nya... This is a very good story, with an amzing potential just waiting to be harvested - and posted in a new chapter!

I like how *Kazutaka* is not similar to the canon Muraki; it ain't often that one likes their favourite characters to be OOC, but in this case, the boy's emotions at realzing this world will not accept him is very believable, and somehow, I just feel a need sypathise with him. I almost cried at him realizing that this world's Tsuzuki is a complete, utter stranger. (Almost, cuz I'm a hardened, jaded Angst subscriber/reader.)

And I did not miss the irony of Muraki and Hisoka switching the roles of victim/protagonist and antagonist.

I beg all Hisoka-fans' pardon, but Hisoka appears a little... clingy and dare i say it... bitchy, in this fic. Thankfully, he returns to being an engaging and 'in character' Hisoka soon.

Love the plot, but manybe it's precisly that the plot is so unusual that RubyD-san (any relation to Groove Adventure RAVE's Ruby-san?) is having writer's block. Or life just gets too busy; it tends to happen.

Ah well.

A wonderful read, but I'm only complaining for leaving us readers hanging, however unintentionally. And the story was just starting to gear up! *Trying very hard not to whine and obviously not succeeding*

*Gives up and melts into a messy puddle of drool on the cold, hard floor named 'Cliffhanger'*

Continue the legacy of your pen!

Best Wishes,

Cui Shan

Wow! This is really good! I can't wait to read future chapters...! I hope...

O_O AH (starts babbling) you ... just... left... it... and... OO; UPDATE (screams) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! THIS IS SUCH A COOL STORY I LOVE IT! (I wish I thought of it T_T;;) please please please update

O_O I just gotta say, this is the most interesting idea (and well written!) in YnM fics that I've ever read. Seriously! I really like your Kasutaka - can't wait to see how him and Hisoka interact.. As well how all of the different dimension's characters have changed. Thank you, and keep writing!

Dude, I hope you continue this! I doubt you will since its been so long but I really, really hope you do. The idea of a nice Muraki is mind boggling... well, not exactly nice but not the bastard he was. Please continue!

Oh wow...this is a GOOD fic! I hope you update it soon. I hope you update it at all! It's wonderful, the premise is interesting, and...I'd just like to see more of it, really. Please. Thank you. (please don't make me come back and beg...)

Hot dang! This story rocks! Your writing style is awesome, and there's no weird transitions; it all flows very well! I can't wait to read what happens next! If they use the door that they came through in, will it take them back to their world, or not; leaving them to travel endless worlds 'til they find home again, like on Sliders? Wah, long review! Write more soon! See ya!

Cool fic, update soon!