Ok, now I finished reading, and I'm not sure where plot is going on. Also I didn't understand why league act so unserious about Jinx, I mean for Batman even young criminal is criminal, so...talking to KF was stupid for me, at least from that perspective, when they could decide to not react so fast only because girl saved their life's, and that could be explanation, which didn't happen. Speaking of KF is there something that i miss, case he didn't talk about Jinx as someone who can became a hero, but again this is OK, and just need explanation, maybe he fall in love in her without "turning good" stuff, which is obviously what actually happened.
Now speaking about characters, Jinx- i really see that girl possess one of the most destructive powers, which was obviously in series, for example when Jinx cast small hex on ocean water to make tsunami. So...if use imagination she really could cause even bigger destruction with concentrate. In series she didn't do that, not because she can't, but rather because it was planned to make her good(comics Titans is all about that, even finish with final panel KF and J kissing), so yeah she wasn't like portrayed as monster who love kill people. No, she was all about steeling goodies. So the way how you portrait Jinx like as greatest villain in future perspective was was in character. Theme with Joker father was surprise, but i guess something deep hidden there, so naah i don't believe em even if Jinxy call em parents, i believe thay just adopt her, or stole her from some mad man who actually "create" Jinx. So with that said fot me it's obviously that you are Jinx fan, but...
KF, well don't know what you feel about him, but for now i saw him as " damsel in distress", when Jinx is real "hero". And well, I like the idea of strong Jinxy, who is not crying calling KF to help her, which was in series and comic book, but KF is her own "bitch" for now, which is also not good. Girl was strong and cool, but her man also wasn't weak at all. In power perspective I could see that Jinx powers are all about destruction and making chaos, when KF is all about saving people, fighting against those who creating that chaos(Romeo and Juliet at the very least just saying how people love such stories about forbidden love of enemies), so I guess you need to show some KF coolness stuff,without Jinxy looking weak.
So yeah, waiting for next chapters of this fanfic.

Ok, I didn't like how your story begins, case just saw your small experience in fic writing, but it was worth waiting case each your chapter became better, and I enjoy your story. So far I'm not finished yet with reading, but love your characters and whole plot, especially Jinx. I guess when you finish story you could rewrite first few chapters and solve everything, to make this whole story looking great.

get your god dam head back in the game

like i love the flinx. pls udpdate

Hey there!

I understand writing is very tough and all, you have to come up with creative ideas and write in a mature way, but your story idea and characterization is out of this world. Your writing and this story makes me feel something, like I’m in a another world, as if I’m in a characters shoes, as if there emotions are translating to me.

And that is a Gift, a natural talent.

And hey if you don’t want to write anymore that’s fine. There is no pressure on you to update, we as your fans just want to make sure you are doing fine. Cause honestly when we read this story, we as fans love the notes you put at the end. It show you, and hey that’s awesome.

You are a awesome human being, and the fact that you have a passion for writing and care about your fans option is so sweet. And that fact that you finally came back for your fans to write another chapter is amazing!

What I’m trying to say here is don’t give up. Life is tuff, as for me I have suffered with anxiety, depression, and bullying, and there’s always a light at the end, trust me.

So even if you don’t want to write anymore, or need help PM me. Cause this is nomnomthegreat expect I’m way to lazy to log in cause if my parents find out about me reading fanfic I am dead (not really, but the lectures...ya...).

Just remember, try and your will do amazing things.

I think she's french

Honey we’re waiting for our edges to be snatched

Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls

Dudeeeeeeeeee

Or

Girllllllllllllllllllllllll

YOU ARE SUCH A STAPLE IN THIS COMMUNITY

LIKE YESSSSSXXXXXXX

YOUR STORY AND WORK IS FLAWELESS, AND I LOVE THE ORGINALITY

LIKE YOU MUST COUNTINE THIS

I MEAN I WAS SCRAMING WITH JOY LOGGING ON TODAY TO REALISE THIS WAS UPDATED, (yah I found out a couple months late but you know...)

SO GET YOUR BRILLENT, CREATIVE MIND BACK IN THE GAME, THINK ABOUT THE FAVOURITES, REVIEWS, FOLLOWS, AND MOST IMPORTANTLY YOU AMAZING TALENT

GET YOUR HEAD BACK IN THE GAME AND YOU CAN DO THIS

I am so not waiting for another year for a update. You have talent in writing. You beautifully describe a characters emoition, making them fully human. U CAN DO IT

U CAN DO IT
;)

Excellent, wonder full update, can’t wait for the next one

Omgggbbbbbbbbbggggggg ahhhhhhhhhhhh, I remember when this story first came out, and I though you left it. I am crying tears of joy, never give up on this masterpiece. I love the story.

Looooooove the new update!

God bless you

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You slay with this chapter, i mean tbh i am writing this review before i read the story but i had the biggest smile on my face whn you updated, and get it, life comes in the way. I don't care that this is the short chapter, you just shook the flinx fanfic world. yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

pls man/girl you need to update, like its killing me, the suspenese and everything, i love the plot so much, don't give up on your fans. Like you are a icon and huge star in the flinx fanfic world.

bro,love the story but ya need to update its been two years