Reviews for Hidden
SadderPanda chapter 13 . 3/15/2017
Excellent job, a different spin on it which is good.
SadderPanda chapter 3 . 3/14/2017
This is not your first fic, how about coming back to it and editing the horrible grammar and spelling? Also strawberry fields, in Japan? As leaders in the world of horticulture, it would be worth your while to research what could actually be growing there. Ash and Willow huh, right outside your window I suppose? Try harder to localize GH into Japan.
LadyIzo chapter 13 . 11/10/2014
I'm really glad that I found this FF. Thank you for writing it :DDD Though I was skeptical at first I actually like how you changed up the story plot. The things that you changed actually made the ship look less forced than what I've been reading recently and I liked that a lot. I'm head over to the second story now 3
GhostLucy chapter 13 . 6/21/2014
Yay sequel
Keme Ana chapter 8 . 5/19/2014
Dont repeat that, ah, naru the sensible one...
Starkitten19 chapter 13 . 5/15/2014
It was amazing :)
devilworshiper13 chapter 13 . 4/28/2014
aww cute I loved it thank you for writing it ,it made my week x
DemonPrincess713 chapter 13 . 1/2/2014
What a great ending:D I can't wait to read the sequel!
DemonPrincess713 chapter 4 . 1/1/2014
NARU! Such a cute chapter!
NaginiFay chapter 13 . 12/18/2013
I hope you did write a sequel!
Kagome Pureheart chapter 13 . 10/12/2013
It was hilarious once I finally understood the unicorn thing
Damaged Forest Spirit chapter 13 . 10/3/2013
ROFLMAO! "I'll have you know that I am still a beautiful, majestic unicorn. No one is majestic enough to ride me," I love that line!
AmyNChan chapter 13 . 9/28/2013
DAAWWWWWWW! This was so sweet! Meh loves, but whatever happened with that Ash character?
AmyNChan chapter 12 . 9/28/2013
Lol, Lin is also a man of secrets and half-truths. XD
AmyNChan chapter 11 . 9/28/2013
Lol for water wars, but I wonder what set Kamin off...
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