Reviews for Sugar Free
capriciousFangrl chapter 2 . 4/2/2015
I must say that I started reading your fanfiction after reading about it in the comment section of a certain fan-art site, and I've been loving the read so far! Your story-telling is fun, ironic in some ways, and character-wise I believe your renditions of the so-very-lovable-cuties are spot-on. But of course, maybe that's simply my fangirl speaking...
CanadianCold chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
By far the best line I've ever read in anything: "But he felt like a huge, stupid, stalkery penis, and he fucking hated kombucha." Oh god, I laughed so hard. xD This story is already delightful.
Aim-For-The-Target chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
Oh wow. I am just completely melting over this story! You're a wonderful writer! I haven't found such a beautifully written AU fanfic anywhere on the entire span on the internet. I hope you continue this, and I await the update :)
bluegirlalexis chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
OMG!
That ending!
Best chapter yet!
I AM in love WITH THIS STORY!
Please keep updating it on FF; I don't have an archive account!
Please?
Oh, and by the way, you are a god of words and don't ever let anyone tell you differently!
Thank you for writing this!
THIS IS PERFECTION!
Lil Enchantress chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
I loved the secret track at the end, it's so cute. C: Also, the length of this chapter was beyond amazing! I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. This is seriously one of my favorite fanfictions of Dave/John. I love it so much. C:

I wish I could have an account on Archive of Our Own. I guess it's still in beta though? Lol, oh well. Eventually!

Many many thanks for the update. C:

Lil Enchantress
Guest chapter 5 . 10/19/2012
This is an incredibly awesome fic. I love the story and it's fun to read, please write more! C:

Lil Enchantress
Randomstrike chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
DAVE STRIDER! XDDD
you did a great job at his personality
Randomstrike chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
Shy Dave is a nice fix
yarho chapter 5 . 10/8/2012
Ahh I love this you write this pairing so well! Please tell me there will be an update? 3
the-humble-kitten-tits chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
dear jesus i love this fanfic so much
anoon chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
i need mooooooooore ;_;
Ladurovi chapter 5 . 8/31/2012
Holy fuck. This is like the best shit I've ever read. It's like 4 in the AM and in laughing my ass off XD I seriously am loving this fanfiction so bad right now it hurts. I can't wait until you update 3 thank you do much for taking the time to write this. I EXTREMELY appreciate it :D
Banana chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!
I BEG OF YOU!
Crab Nicholson chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
OMG I FUCKING LOVE YOUR GUTS YOU BETTER UPDATE
Guest chapter 5 . 8/9/2012
Need more :Q
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