Love the way this chapter has been writing, I hope the rest of the chapters will be just like this.

Plz update soon I read this over 4 times and its really good

Funny stuff I really like that u have gokuxvegeta pairing and I also like that there is a gohanxpiccolo pairing but I think u should have made gohan at least a teenager cuz now I juz think piccolo is a pedophile for being with a toddler but dont get me wrong I love gohanxpiccolo pairing is pretty kool anyways I love this story so I cant wait for the next chapter

sooooooo picclow is a girl? crazy! *songrin_* sooo that meens that he can get prego from gohan! plue he is like 8 when gohan is 4!so it could work but i think 'piccoro' would were the pants in the arangment! (i call piccolo 'picclow' cuz it sownds bettah!

cant wait for the next chapter

I think this story is realllllyyy funny lol I like I a lot. You should update soon :)