Any chance of this being pickup again? It is better than most ME AU; I’ve read.

Gotta love paradox interactive.

I have enjoyed your fanfic. You claim your creative juices are running low, but you can't tell from my angle D

Agreed on Diana Allers. I don't mind the character myself, and can see why Emily Wong might not be present. After all, she is the one that landed a big story with Shepard in the first game, and is a bigshot in ME2; why not send a subordinate for ME3?

I didn't like the complete lack of recognition for a good character in ME3. And no, I don't consider a "Ramming Speed" quote a good reference to a character. More like a good way to kill off a character they didn't want to pay for voicing again.

This was a very interesting story and I hope that it will continue that way.

Well this seems great but what ever you do plaese dont kill the Geth. I love the Geth so much!

Hey it's cool. I'm patient...

It is excellent chapter.I look forward to future updates.

Dude I have the same problem, which is why I haven't posted anything other than an AN since 2010.
It's nice to know that others are better than I am ad get their ideas out.

Also, since this hasn't been used since the first game, will you be giving the squad members who can't use the armor pieces Shepard can, because of his class, the armor so they can use them?

Mass Effect: Galaxy At War...

whoa what battle..well why cant they get along?:D

Hate to tell you but you're retcon kn population and fleet sizes doesn't work too well. If 15% of citadel pop is 22 billion then the total population of citadel space is below a hundred and fifty billion. For the asari turian or salarian species I could buy that maybe but it is still a bit low. Humanity probably tops out at about 25 billion, or should but biowares timelines makes no bloody sense. I personally think about a trillion or so total in citadel space and about 100 billion terminus and batarian preReaper. I can buy 10% of a trillion people being under arms total for navy and army for all of citadel space.
I kind of think asari should have the lowest number of dreadnoughts given their military disabilities followed by salarians because of their focus on lightening strikes and intelligence operations. Humanity and the hierarchy would be the frontlu e fighters. Their officers are trained to work in direct combat situations. I think it would be a good idea to have an infodump on the evolution. Of citadel hih command. It would help lay the bag of snakes out straight.

Update?

This is gold. This is how ME3- no everything wrong from ME2 and onward should've been done. You've got the tone the wording the characterization is good Shepard is less static and more of an actual character you seem like you've even watched some of the hyper critical analysis videos of ME3 on YouTube, I want more. So much more.

I just found your story today. Since this seems like a more drawn out conflict then what had happen in ME3 I have one request. When the combined fleets engage above Earth let there be a squadron of new advance human reapers.

I plan to write something like that in the future but I still have 7 months of College Degree program to finish.

I think there should be some Bartarian Reapers too.