I love reading this it is really good and I would really really really like it if you could please keep writing this!

One has to wonder...How does Twilight feel about Spike and Rarity's kid ?

Also, poor Fluttershy, she should have at least known better than to question Spike's loyalty towards his family and friends.

Still, I wonder...where is Rainbow Dash in all of this ?

Nice update and poor Twilight, suffering like that. Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.

Nice to see this again but their is code on the pages

Dude, something is up with chapters 2-4. you may want to look into this

FYI, the last three chapters are swamped with code.

This came through as a page of gibberish!

Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)

very well done :) I really liked seeing the interaction between Rarity & the doctor

There should be a future story focusing on Twilight and Rarity's family and how they deal with the news of Rarity's child and Spike's the father.

At least have some of the Mane 6 learn the news so that they can prepare for the child's arrival. :)

This is the start of something great and I cannot wait to read more of this tale in the future.

Very nice, any chance of an add on?

Being a teen parent, what a nightmare

Tastefully done, and an enjoyable short read. Well done mate.

awesome story you should so do a conclusion

Very good story here. this so needs least another chapter about Spike finding out hes a father.

Now that was just adorable! Very nice job! I hope to see another one-shot like this!